Very VERY well written. And very VERY beautiful. I only wish you had written more. I suspect it would have been very special and very memorable. Thank you for this short effort.

Cheers Jen

Whoa. Not exactly the happiest thing I've read, but it's very well written and I enjoyed it very much. I hadn't read any FX fiction for awhile and your story certainly made me want to make a my little stroll down memory lane a bit longer.

Thank you.