Please update soon!

I hope you write more. Its sad when writers forget about their stories or just leave it and never get back.

Please write more!! I really liked the chapter!! Cannot wait for the next one!

I found the stroy cut off rather short, can you elaborate as to the rest of eth stroy? I would like very much for eth mist of mystery to be unvailed.

that was cool. Update soon.

cOME ON LETS GET TOIT UPDATE

you dont watch spd very much do you? if u would've you'd know that syd has blue eyes. you cant just change how she looks. IT MAKES ME SO MAD WHEN SOMEONE WRITES A STORY AND THEY DONT KNOW WHAT THEY'RE TALKING ABOUT!

ARRGGH!

Sky/Bridge please they are SO hot together and you know it. Go on. You know you want to... Loving the story though, more author comments too because, let's face it Jack probably is a pixie dick

SPD: Taking the Power of Red was alright. I love SPD, man.
Could you PLEASE make some Bridge/Sky slash. That's my favorite kind.

Thanks,
Matt Austin

I hope you dont mind late reviews, but i had to tell you this one thing.

Why Jack? Jack is cool!

I liked it, keep it going, and update soon. I can't wait to see the pairings, this should prove to be interesting.

Please put in the next chapter!

Please update soon!

Okay, just a note, but a little too much detail in the beginning. We don't really need to be introduced, anyone reading probably knows the characters and what they look like.

I like the idea, taking Jack's irresponsibility to the next level, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. A little more background to what he was doing would be nice. I'm assuming it's a continuation of "Confronted". And I didn't think his decisions in battle were really reckless or stupid, there wasn't much he could do.

Update soon, this is cool.

Good start - I guess you don't like Jack very much huh? Looking forward to more. ~the real vampire~