 Kiko Kamia 2007-05-26 . chapter 1haha ... aw ... that's so sweet! tho the sugary-ness might make me have to barf ... =D |
 innocent-rebel 2006-04-10 . chapter 1*sits wide eyed at screen* chica that was so dang beautiful and heartfelt and...heart breaking when Anna was talking. So amazing. truly i did like and wanted to get in there and PUNCH the living daylights out of Anna's dad and brother. what shmucks! lol. loved How Anna would thrash her bros room and Raph raising kittens was to adorable! |
 PyroDeScorpio2 2005-11-12 . chapter 1Oh that was so cute! Loved it loved it! |
 BubblyShell22 2005-09-13 . chapter 1Very cute story. I liked it a lot. You are a good writer.
The Bubbly One,
Shell |
 Empress Caroline of Tamaran 2005-08-11 . chapter 1 Aw...that is SO SWEET of him to do that for her! Very cute story, liked the last line of the note. |
 Jessiy Landroz 2005-06-28 . chapter 1aww.. Mike's so sweet, makes you wanna cuddel him, no?
hehehe, good job, I like this one ^0^/ |
 Sassyblondexoxo 2005-06-20 . chapter 1So we finally got you writing one-shots...
This one turned out very well indeed. Loved Anna, and Mikey was so very sweet. Hoorah for Justice Force comics to the rescue!
Nice job. ~SASSY |
 Chibi Rose Angel 2005-06-18 . chapter 1Aw now I feel loved! I was just telling Pi90katana that I feel like I have a huge extended family even if it is over the internet. It's true too! Your one shot was truly precious and adorable. I loved the portrayal of Mikey because it seems so like him. I loved how he gave her walker a name and then when he brought her the comics, that was so sweet! This one shot reminded me of the Christmas Aliens episode which is what you may or may not have had in mind while writing this but either way, it was simply adorable. It's going on my fave's list right now! WB is horrible isn't it? I'm suffering from the same affliction with my latest story. I'm at chapter seven and the beginning is truly delicious but the beginning middle is very lack luster. Dierdre told me in one of our last email exchanges that it's okay if not every chapter is action packed or agnsty. The only problem is that I know what I want to do once I get past chapter seven but since I'm stuck on chapter seven, I can't move forward. It's not like I can just move on with the story and pretend chapter seven doesn't happen right? At any rate, this is going on my fave's list. Great job! |
 Donny's (don' wanna log in 2005-06-18 . chapter 1 Very sweet story. love it! :D
Monny |
 Ramica 2005-06-18 . chapter 1Ah, what a wonderful one shot, just loved Anna, throwing her brother's stuff at the ceiling fan. Yet at the same time very touching and sad.
You pulled out all the stops with this story LN it was very nicely done and I enjoyed it immensley. In fact i am going to put it into my C2 file. |
 pacphys 2005-06-18 . chapter 1LN WROTE A ONE-SHOT!! *Phones the AP who gives her a confused silence before telling her to go away.* Well, fine. It's better news than the pointless drabble we've been getting from you lately!
You know? That is a convenient little sled they've got there! LOL!
People can be cruel, and that also applies to children. Sad, but true.
That's a rather disgusting little hobby she's got there. LOL! Yeah, Mike would love it!
You know something? Her hobby makes a whole lot more sense now. That's a messed up family. Poor Anna, I hope she gets the help she needs.
AH!! Ok, GB missed. Good.
Oh, that is a sweet little ending there. Wonderful work, LN. Mikey may not want her swearing on angels, but she's got herself a little green guardian one.
Cheers,
~pacphys~ |