Rats! How could he not turn when he heard that or even when what he said finally sank in?

Oh wow I just had to sit there for a second and take it. Wonderful!

*jaw drops*

That was sehr gut as my Deutsch teacher would say.

Aousgezeichnet![Excellent!]

Live long and proser,

Saavik

Lovely. The scene in the film is incredibly powerful and you have added to it.

so heart breaking.

lovly

...well written. Not my genre, but very well written.