... intense...

That was beautiful. Your grammar was good, too.

It was as though he were in the eye of a storm, a storm of his own thoughts and problems and past and conflicts, all circling around him but none coming into the focused part of his mind where he sought sanctuary from all that had happened. It was too much for just one body to bear, it really was.

Liked this quote the most, great written.

WTF?Zuko DIES?!WTF!OMG!WTF!

Whoa.

That was so cool!
MORE, MORE, MORE!
PS: i liked your story, its the best thing ive read in ages!

i think that sounds like his thoughts a lot, but the end was sad :(

This is a good oneshot. ^^; Up until the very end of it, I kept believeing that someone would come along and save Zuko, or something, and there's still the slight glimmer of very rare hope at the end. :B

poor zuko.

I thought that it was an okay story, but I didn't like the ending. If there was maybe another chapter where it ended differently I would have liked it a little more.

Tired of This-

Ah, so you have now decided to help the beta-reader. Well, I'll certainly admit my writing's not the best. But I'm improving.

And have you noticed that I haven't updated this fic in 3 months or so? I've kind of given up on it, actually, because it's now an AU.

But of course, I am willing to take any help I can get; I'm just wary of giving out my email address because I'm one of those random Internet safety hounds.

Well, and besides that, your email didn't show up. On FFNet, you see, they won't let you put hyperlinks or email addreses in a review or a story. So, just put a space in between it (i.e. someone @ something . net) and it works like a charm.

Thank you for taking the time to read this and the offer to help me get better. It is very much appreciated.

P.S. I love Zutara. It's okay if you don't like. I don't mind that. Just please don't insult it because you don't like it. I don't do that to any other ship. So don't wrong me if I haven't wronged you.

Once again, thank you for your time.

THIS IS AWESOME! Hey, I know I'm 2 chapters late, but I'd just like to say that I think it'd be better if you kept romance to a minimum, and you should include a little ZxK and a little AxK. That'll make it interesting. ;) KEEP GOING!

A fantastic story, very well written. Your characters are true to their natures, and I can't help but wonder if you're a professional! I especially like Zuko's thoughts and insights, they're exactly what I'd imagine he was thinking. And if certain romances -happen- to show up, I don't think anyone is going to disapprove, least of all me.

Lol, Sokka kills me! You got to love him! Please keep writing! Sorry it's not much of a review, but I'm sure I don't need to remind you that your story is great. :)

Just because I'm a crazy person I am going to randomly say I vote for Zutara everytime. Now lets just hope I don't get pummeled by Kataang fans. But really I like the way the plot is going and you actually made Zuko seem like himself. I applaude you and curse my inability to spell ^^