Hmm...uh, interesting. I'd reccomend continuing. Work on your grammar a bit, though.

Hey great start- please continue the story. I'm very interested in where you're going to take this. Just a quick question. Will you do a story regarding the arrival of Diana and how she got the job working with the CIA? Or are you going for a complete surprising twist? Either way I look forward to reading.

cool story! i am glad you modernized it, unlike the first one where it took place in WW2.

Very interesting indeed!

PS, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Goddess Anjanee :)

how interesting... please continue! i cant wait to see what happens next

I like what you have so far and am intrigued. Please continue.

I like what you have so far. Please continue.

I’m intrigued, please continue.