What a great story!! I know it might be a bit old now but still! One of the best i've read!

This is still the best of the best even though I'm looking at it again.

Wa! Sora! I...I...

Xela: S-shut up Guan!

Avan: *sniff* Xela, your actually crying? And, you actually called Guan, Guan!

Xela: N-no. I...I'm not. And I didn't call Sappy Guan.

Avan: But its ok. Even for being Guan's Dark Side.

Xela: Dang it! This was the most beautiful story I have to read!!

Me: I...I know...even though I read it before, it's still leaves tears in your eyes when you keep reading again. If you finished reading this story and go back to the beginning, you'll just cry for what Sora was! 100%! 10-10! 100-100!

Avan and Xela: 10-10!

Me: Never give up! Never look back at the past! Keep going forward!

Xela: when there's darkness in your past...

Avan: always know that there's a light in your future!

Me: I hope that people can see this and appreciate for what the story is trying to say, the signs it leaves.

i loved this story althoe it made me cry like 4 or 5 times but it was realy good keep up the good work.

omg, omg, OMG! I LOVE this story. This is the first fanfiction story I've readin in the beginning. The one that started it all with my hobby of reading fanfictions since when I first read this story back in 2005. And I finally found it.

Shortly after I finished playing Kingdom Hearts 1, I want to see something more. Something about Kingdom Hearts that I want to enjoy. I guess I'm not making much sense here =( . Since I'm in a place that nobody likes me, Kingdom Hearts, Anime/Manga, and homosexuals I've just wanted a way to vent out, well, ah.. I really loved Sora and Riku from KH1 (even though Riku was being a jerk throughout the whole game, I like that he was still a good guy in the end) I just want to see or read something about the two interacting (besides, SoraxRiku was my first favorite fan pairing since I played KH1, and it still is. I now have other new fav pairings, but SoraxRiu will always be in my heart).
Basically, I just really love this story.

eamail is neal. really wanan red the one part *nudge nudge*

awsome

you rule so hard

Wow. That was like immediate plot progression. Love came super fast there.

Very nice story! Even though there's some inconsistency...
In the beginning of the story, Sora went off to the dojo to learn to protect himself. But when he starts to love Riku, Sora suddenly becomes weaker and more helpless than ever. A big gap that keeps pestering me whenever Sora gets kidnapped.
Other than that, the fic's very nice and smooth. Thanks for uploading!
(p.s. Sora gets raped a bit more than needed.)

Just to be honest... Actually i dun like the ending, it's just that i hate death character. But it's a nice story!

wow. this is such a good fic! it actually made me cry at the end. for 30 minutes! i felt so bad for riku. i normally dont read anything-angsty but i made an exception for this fic and im glad i did. it is one of the best fics of its kind in my opinion! bravo and keep up the good work^^

~MoMo

LIKE LIKE LIKE!

*whines* aw man, i wanna read the lemon... please send it to me...? (by the way... i love the story thus far)

Way to make a girl cry! Seriously, I was sobbing. I never thought the plot twist would go to that extent...
Anyways, you have to keep writing these. They are too awesome!
*runs off to bed to cry in her pillow*