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| hikarisforever 2008-07-28 ch 7,  | abuseok i think im going to cry now. |
| hikarisforever 2008-07-28 ch 6, | abuseomg i wanted to cry at the start poor ryou. but bakura wants to love him! |
| Chisaki-chan 2007-08-21 ch 7, | abusePoor Ryou! Emo angstyness! Update? |
| Lady.R 2007-07-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseso sad |
| Lady.R 2007-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwhh the poor thing, i hoe he will get better soon (sniff) |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-11-24 ch 7, | abuseAh!! No! O.O *horrified look* I REALLY want Ryou to get better but it isn't looking like he's going to!! *Sobs* I'm wondering how your going to write it from here, so please update soon! |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-11-24 ch 6, | abuseI don't get how you could hate your writing/story! It's great!! ^^ *Giggles with happyness* I wish I could say somthing to convince you other then "I love your writing with a passion"...>.> :P Anyways, good chapter. I'm glad that they've kinda got this sorted out. |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-11-24 ch 5, | abuse*Snatches a 2 by 4 out of nowhere* Stupid Bakura...*hiss* Hurting Ryou like that is horrible!! I don't understand why he wanted him back after hurting him so much!! Like always, I found no mistakes(Not like I was looking and expecting for them though lol) your one of the best authors up here! I definatly couldn't pull myself to write a story like this. :P Keep up the good work, (sry if my constant reveiws are tiring to read. lol ;P) |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-11-24 ch 4, | abuseAww...geesh...to me, Ryou would be EXTREAMLY hard to forget. lol. I don't know if I want to go on and read the next chapter if you have somthing EVIL planned for Ryou! T.T lol jk. |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-11-24 ch 3, | abuseAh! IT all makes sense now! :O Thanks for clearing that up for me...lol, I'm glad to hear that Bakura didn't do that because he HATED him...:)...I think...:S. I thought it was great how you explained how the white room only showed his dark eyes. :P Pretty neat visual! |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWell that's depressing to the fullest extent!! :O I don't get it...in one of your stories I read, BakuraxRyou loved eachother...but in this one...o.O He tortured him! lol guess you like variety huh? :P Anyways, great writing. I don't really enjoy reading about Ryou being so broken...can you please write a happy one? lol sorry if that sounds...dumb...but I really liked the character you made Ryou in the "Farther Away" one. And I don't mean happy like, Ryou getting flowers from Bakura who took an hour going through the park to pick them... I just mean, happy based...like, problems coming up...but Ryous still going to be okay. (Not saying that the ending will be known for sure!) Okay, I'm done rambling...I'm going to continue with the story anyways. :) Great job. |
| Sarah the Slayer 2006-09-17 ch 7, | abuseWhat? Suicide? NO! Aw, poor Ryou...Seriously, I know it's like, impossible, but is the story over or what? Cuz...that was a quick ending... |
| lolly-moon 2006-09-16 ch 7, | abusewoa...AH RYOU! great chappie. 5 stars ^^ (youtube language:P) i really loved the irony near then end where ryou was all smiley with bakura and then turns around all angsty. awesome ^^ xoxo |
| FanFicFanGurl101 2006-09-15 ch 7, | abuseoh my swing! i cant believe he attempted suicide!! are you freakin serious?! ~faints~ update damn you!! >:O |
| Ritsu-sensei 2006-09-15 ch 7, | abusehow dare you?how you can kill little stupid ryou?so plz dont kill ryou or i`ll kill my self...your story is really angst and i love it! ^-^ |