Wow, this was great! Nice work!

Love it. That is almost exactly how I imagined it!

Good.

Very nice. I like the way you explained the 'not gotten involved' line of Obi-Wan's

This was well and truly unique! I've never ead a fic from Owen's perspecitve before, and aside from perhaps a few idle moments, I never even considered his perspective on the matter. It's really obvious that you got your BA in Creative Writing... I'm still working on mine for English!

On an off topic, can I also say it's really encouraging to see an adult that still writes and enjoys fanfiction? My sister and my parents seem to think I'll just grow out of it... I know better. _

Great story, I may just hve to read more!

Very good. Keep up the good work.

Do you know how good this story is? If not, then let me make sure you do! It's absolutely fabulous!

You capture Owen's bitterness about Anakin and urge to protect Luke very well. And Beru's emotions too. Great story.