After all the time waiting, an update!

+ Very well written!
+ Nice description.
+ I love the envious room scene!
+ The dialogues (specially Demitri) are quite nice and gives character.

The only negative is that there is no WOLF-KUN! lol

I always do this every time I see a lupine character named Wolf... :D

lol

Looks like he'll be in a fix for now. I have an odd feeling that there's something that's gonna happen between him and Fox!

(btw, what arena do you want for Janus?)

You should make him use the moves we put up in the Wolf Arena Clash... janus, I mean!

lol

So great, Fox went missing? What happened? Hmm... I sense trouble brewin'.

And what about Cecilia? And lies? Hmm... Intrigues!

Getting good, getting good. (btw, this is Fenrir with a new pen name.)

And again you leave me to the state of hanging on a cliff.

So this Demitri is in love with Karen, whom he met in the jungle... And snipers.

Why does it have to be snipers? lol

Dude you rock. Your book is fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapter. Tell me when its ready.

So I see Karen's back too. Nice. And those dudes with the masks kinda remind of the enemies from Killzone...

You my friend are in your way to make into suspense/action fics! Keep it up! Damn, I thought he wouldn't make it! And to think...

Hmm... Mayeb I should let my casts review your KH fic! lol

Woo! Go Dimitri! Nice chapter. The dream was especially interesting.

Aww... sweet!

It's a father-son chapter, with some stuff about maturity, respect, and independence.

Likewise, your story focuses in their emotions clearly. I would like to see how Dimitri would fare as a merc!

Well, I think that was a nice father-son moment there.

Yay! I wonder who those attackers are... Hey, you said something about Sargasso so... Hmm... No way, I don't believe it!

>_< Please review my story...

Falco! w00t! Thanx again fro reviewing my fic. Update soon.

My original penname was Bane the Mad Demon Slayer.

Cool!

You relieved about the bounty hunters! I thought they were Star Wolf! Cool cool! And... why is his vital signs dropping?