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harmony-of-mar
2008-05-09 . chapter 5
i like this. a lemon next, perhaps?
Seto's Darkness
2008-04-05 . chapter 5
I loved all of them
jaques-lefrou
2008-01-26 . chapter 5
Soo cool. i like it... Update please
Atrophy
2007-10-02 . chapter 5
I adore these stories. Your characterization of Kanda is so incredibly perfect.

I'm not too enamoured with the idea of Allen sexing up a couple of guys just because he has base urges and doesn't know any better. I prefer thinking of him as someone who would know it was taboo, but do it anyway because he's got his own set of morals that he lives by.

Just a pet peeve. I love the way you write him in all of the other ficlets.

And hahahahah! I completely see what you mean about "that person". My brain started chanting "Itachi" at the line "wears his face."

This last one has a nice feeling to it, like Kanda's... fighting on Allen's behalf. But I loved the first one, too. And the one with the card game. And the...
Chels
2007-02-23 . chapter 3
holy shi-wow this is insanely hot *fans myself*
ChelZ
2007-02-19 . chapter 5
*faints* these are so good! keep writing please! =D
Soichiro
2006-11-19 . chapter 5
Frick you for leaving a cliff-hanger! Finish it already! What's wrong with Kanda! And where's Rabi?!?
Soichiro
2006-11-18 . chapter 4
Allen isn't that suductive!Interesting!What happened to Rabi!!
Soichiro
2006-11-18 . chapter 3
Allen is such a two-timer! But he really got Rabi good and now Kanda. M very sweet.
Soichiro
2006-11-18 . chapter 2
O.Heh heh Rabi got Kanda good, now i'm really curious!
Soichiro
2006-11-18 . chapter 1
i don't understand, but sweet.
lina
2006-08-05 . chapter 5
Wah, I love your stories, you are a brilliant writer! Update soon!
Jen
2006-05-31 . chapter 2
That was funny XD Rabi claiming Kanda's a pedophile right after talking about Allen's age
DoYouFindMeDreadful
2006-03-18 . chapter 4
Yay! I love it! Please write more! If not for this, then at least a lemon for the "M" rated secetion! You should really do a Kanda X Allen X Rabi lemon! ^_^
flossaeh
2005-08-13 . chapter 5
I just have to say this so stupidly, but: I love you~! ^^ DGM fics, AllenKanda~ AllenKandaRabi~ o~ but the one named "pedophile" Was the best! xD That really made me laugh ^^
But but but~! Wrote more! I will be waiting ^^
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