cool

Hee, good one.

Just wanted to say that there is a Citizen II and I am plotting another sequel.

I'm curious, is that 'The End' or are you going to continue?

Cry

Wait. That's it? I'd hardly say that counts as a fic. All you did was write out parts of already-existing episode scenes, just repeating the lines already spoken. It's an interesting idea, though, that could be an interesting fic if you took this as a starting point. What happens now? Does Xander join the Stargate program? Do Buffy et al get involved? This requires more to actually even call itself a fic.

I loved how they found each others lives to be relaxing. I can handle any problem... except my own. *snicker*

I loved that episode of Stargate, and I loved how you twisted it to put Xander in the situation instead. I liked Jack's thoughts of how the adventures, torture, etc, was the everyday ordinary stuff, but that he really liked the comics. Interesting story!

I liked that. Very drabblish and cute. Any more where that came from?

hehehe. me likes humor.