Another nice L/V. I liked the "time travel," even if it didn't turn out quite as Luke had expected.

Phantom Jedi

aw that's sweet! *smiles*

aw! that was sweet_

That was very sweet. I like the softer side of Vader, especally when he's around his children.

aw.

Aww... touching story there. Amusing, touching in a sense... hm. But oh, it would've made for a scary story if it had worked. And they ended up somewhere completely off the wall... (Starts thinking about what would've happened were they to end up on Middle-earth...)

Erk. (grins) Good story.

I love the naivety your Luke possesses.

I really like the twist at the end. Nice job.

It's Gardulla the Hutt

But Smenzer! You wrote another masterpiece!

Aw! Still missing my daddy, ya made it worse again, that's good by the way.

God Bless,

Catalina Tavington

Another masterpiece, Smenzer! You have humor, goofiness (in the form of Luke), and emotion wonderfully meshed in this one. Great job!

I love your stories. :)