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| the persuit of shiney thing... 2007-02-05 ch 11,  | abuseNEO, not Chirs! Chris is awesome! Don't cook him! Very nice job with the Kyo cooking. I'm glad that the other readers and I could help. Update soon. |
| Mireillle 2007-02-04 ch 11, | abuselol |
| Kitsune 2007-02-02 ch 11, anon. | abuseI really liked the story, but I must admitt I liked the comentary before and after the story much better!! |
| iheartclementines 2007-02-01 ch 11, | abuseNO PROFANITY!NO EATING KYO! HES TO HOT! GIVE HIM TO ME! PLEASE! |
| iheartclementines 2007-02-01 ch 5, | abuseWHY ARE YOU EATING KYO! GIVE HIM TO ME! I'LL TAKE HIM! HES HOT! TO HOT TO EAT! |
| iheartclementines 2007-02-01 ch 2, | abusegood, but a little short... |
| iheartclementines 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuseWHAT! YOU MAKE ALICE CUT! YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE! THAT IS JUST NOT RIGHT! YOU EVIL PERSON! huh! i am not reading this anymore! *walks away, then turns around and says* great story! cant wait for next chapter! this is from a veiwpoit that really enjoy reading and wish i could write myself! (i am joking until the compliments! that is the real review! anything in caps or between asterics [**those thingies] is a joke!) |
| ANIME FREAK 2007-01-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseOMG! IT WAS GREAT EXCEPT FOR SOME SPELLING MISTAKES, HOWEVER, IT WAS WONDERFUL AND ITS SO SAD THAT I ALMOST CRY MY ** OUT! T-T XD |
| the persuit of shiney thing... 2007-01-23 ch 10, | abuseYou are quite welcome, about correcting your mistake (Chris' or whatever). New chappie goodness! Will Frey ever stop thinking Nyozeka's a ghost? It's seriously starting to BUG me...and why does he have to turn into Billy? WHY! |
| Mireillle 2007-01-06 ch 10, | abuse*flames* hah well anyway this is a good story. |
| the persuit of shiney thing... 2006-12-31 ch 9, | abuseDid I not tell you the no update thing was a flame? You could've cooked him a little bit, or used it to get the fire stared. Jeez... |
| the persuit of shiney thing... 2006-11-28 ch 8, | abuseI was begining to think Kyo had finally exacted his revenge on you or something. WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG TO UPDATE, JEEZ! (and yes, that does count as a flame). Nyozeka's back, yay! And Frey...is Frey. Oh, and don't hurt Chris please. He's kinda cute. |
| Helbaworshipper 2006-07-18 ch 3, | abuseThe mother's name is Mikako Seno, just to let you know. I know nothing of the father's name though. Good Writing, but there should be a more rounded story arc, and it could move a little slower. Your chapter length could be a problem, but it may improve with a change in pacing. |
| Anon. 2005-12-31 ch 7, anon. | abuseYeesh, it's been forever since you wrote...and forever since I reveiwed! This was a good chapie, Yang! It's always fun making fun of Frey...and torturing Kyo. Ha! You know what you should do? You should throw Kyo to the evil, hyper, rabid fan girls. He won't survive THAT...or is it too cruel? Either way, keep writing. I love this story! WE! |
| Jillian 2005-12-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseWell...O.O This story's crazy (in a good way). Kyou definitely has turned into a villain, in my eyes. I guess he does deserve to be sacrificed. :P (I bet Mayura might have brainwashed him with the Maram words...or something like that. :P) Anyway...I think this story could use some Frey x Alice! ^_^ |