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| DayDreamer9 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseGod, this was SO cool XD I really do hope you continue; I'd like to see what led up this cutsie affection XD |
| Unispaps 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is really well written. And besides that statement... I'm speechless. I wish I could write more, saying how much I love you, and this piece of work, but... my mind is dead right now. Sorry. ~.~ |
| anonymous 2005-11-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWho are they running from? You seem to have gotten me hooked with this introduction, only to leave everyone hanging with only one chapter. Please continue this story. |
| sarahtheweirdo 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully put and loved the poem!^^ When I read the line, "Humans... the bastards." I just cracked up, it was exactly what Hiei would say in a serious situation if humans were looking for him. I would say that the kissing part was my favorite and my lest when they had to stop and run again. The emotions and everything else worked out okay. Keep up the good work! |
| Rowan (Sakura's resting) 2005-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHn. That was...naturally, beautiful. I loved it and I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter...er, technically the first chapter. Gotta wonder whom they were running from. Beautiful poem, btw... |
| Inuyashas' Plaything 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseomg! you need to update soon! that was an awesome chapter, but now i need to know what happens next! so please please please please please update soon! ^-^ |
| Ainohimitsu 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWow! Absolutely beautiful, my dear! I felt the sheer intensity and urgency within this fic... Excellent job as always! And I hope you do continue this fic! Yo-sama P.S. btw this is yodaihiro... |
| hyperdude 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseO my gosh...that was the best one shot ever. You've got a wonderful talent for writing...I genuinely hope that you gget a good career in writing, so you can share your wonderful stories with everyone else. |
| Rujutoshi 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was cool! I really liked it since it was from Hiei's POV, I can't remember a story where you did that before. They both seemed in character, Yusuke with his little remarks and Hiei's thoughts on how he acted. It was a nice touch.^^ It was a nice little prologue thing, but like you said, you can do anything with it. If something does continue I'd be happy to read it. Great job, byebye! |
| kit-kit 2005-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abusewow nice chapter i loved the poem alot. |
| Diana-sama 2005-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat... That was so beautiful! You're writing is inspiring, really. The natural flow of the sentences... just handsome. Pretty. It's been a long time since I've found anything decent on :P I hope you update soon! Ja matta, Diana-sama PS. Too lazy to log in. :P |
| Seto'segyptianluvr 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseAnother awesome ficcy! Wow, I shouldn't 've had those strawberries... Hyper! But as I said great job! |
| Agent Dark Moose 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow! Fabulous job with this so far! It actually got my heart racing, and stuff... Yeah. The imagery was so vivid... You have a great way of describing things, to get the reader in the right mood, and such. I can't wait to see more. I knew right when I saw the title that this would be wonderful... And I was bloody right! You have such an amazing talent. Keep writing, always! ~Lynn P.S. The poem was wonderful! Much better than I could ever do! |
| Skittles the Sugar Fairy 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseOh this is good! ^^ To tired to leave a proper review. Sry. |
| Sakura Sango 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, how beautiful of a beginning. Once again I'm thrown into awe of how marvelous of a writer you truly are. Great job!! I cannot wait for more. Wonderful pairing, wonderful story and wonderful job in writing. Please update soon, I cannot wait to see what happens next. Till next time. ~SakuraSango~ |