I hope you continue this because I'm really liking it. Great job.

This one is good, well written, story with a lot of potential. I hope you'll update it.

Interesting so far. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

This is a really good start. I'm quite impressed with your writing, you seem to know what grammar is for, which is all to rare to find.

Hope you update this some time soon.

Glad that someone else likes NCIS too. I don't think I like it more than CSI, but it is better in some ways, like how it is very funny when Tony annoys Kate(like brother and sister), and when they pick on McGee, or when Gibbs smacks Tony on the head. Anyways, just want you to know that I love the story so far, but if you end up not putting Sara in the story very much, I don't know if I will read anymore. Sara's kinda my favorite CSI, and with Vartan's thought about "He might not have to deal with Ecklie, but he got the baby CSI and Sidle instead," it sounds like you don't approve of Sara and Greg. Or maybe Vartan doesn't?

Glad that someone else likes NCIS too. I don't think I like it more than CSI, but it is better in some ways, like how it is very funny when Tony annoys Kate(like brother and sister), and when they pick on McGee, or when Gibbs smacks Tony on the head. Anyways, just want you to know that I love the story so far, but if you end up not putting Sara in the story very much, I don't know if I will read anymore. Sara's kinda my favorite CSI, and with Vartan's thought about "He might not have to deal with Ecklie, but he got the baby CSI and Sidle instead," it sounds like you don't approve of Sara and Greg. Or maybe Vartan doesn't?

good story, I can't wait for the crossover!

Oh. I hate Fridays also. Poor Vegas being invaded by NCIS. Should be great. I'm looking forward to this.

Awesome! An NCIS/CSI crossover. I've wanted to see one!!

I can see who'll act well together, as friends.

Greg-Abby
Gibbs-Grissom
Tony-Nick-Warrick
Kate-Catherine-Sara

Probie's gonna be left out again. Poor Probie. He'll probably stick with Abs and Greggo. Though he probably won't like Greg's attitude all the time...

Great idea.

Good beginning-I love that Vartan got stuck with it
though!

"Baby CSI"? That's funny-maybe Probie and Greg will
get along?

Thanks for the new fic-now what?:)