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| FanFictionFanatic 2007-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseDidn't put in my e-mail add. last time. Thought you might want it. |
| FanFictionFanatic 2007-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove the Disclaimer. 'I think I found her' might have sounded better as a more certain 'statement' rather than a probable one. Generally worth the while. |
| sniperalchemist 2007-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseahh!! fluff is addictive but very good! I was laughing when Roy was talking like that, but then I started crying when Riza did...BEAUTIFLY WRITTEN! and the ending was amazing; it'll make any Royai fan fall out of there chair (in a good way!) me-*reads fic and falls out fo chair (oops...) PWNSOME FIC! |
| Bizzy 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThough I couldn't picture Riza crying, overall this was very in character. I loved the last line!! |
| causmicfire 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. Keep up the good work! |
| thepennameboo 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseAW that was so good. im all choked up. *sniff* |
| KO'ed 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it. No, really, I do. I always have trouble with my endings, but this one was perfect for the mood of the fic. The whole concept of Roy getting wasted with Hughes' photo made me want to reach through your well-written text and hug him. ;-; Thanks for the amazing read. Favorite'd, bish! ;D |
| Arcane Legacy 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseHoley moley, two AWESOME FMA fanfics in a row! I must be on a roll! But, this is AMAZING, to say the very least about it. This is spectacularly written and full of emotion - I didn't know whether to laugh or cry myself at the idea of Roy sharing a birthday drink with Hughes' photograph (for whatever reason, i've always called him by his last name or his whole name, so...). I eventually ended up doing a combination of both. Kudos to you for making me laugh or cry at all! Beyond that - Keep up the good work! |
| MoonStarDutchess 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseIt was very cleaver. |
| RoyXRiza 2005-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sigh* I liked your drunk talk. I am gonna do that from now on to my brother to ** him off. Hehehehe... but I don't think your ending was cheesy. i would love to be Riza. Well, dreams sometimes come true. I hope you continue writing. Your fan, Doughnut. P.S. Doughnut isn't my real name, i just like to use it. |
| Yeah this is deleted. 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome ^_^ |
| ooOAnimeChildOoo 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseVERY NICE. i REALLY LIKED IT. iT MADE ME CRY RERADING ABOUT rOY AND mAES. tHANKS YOU FOR THE VERY NICE STORY. ^_^ |
| animelover489074 2005-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuselove and peace :) |
| Wot Wot Wark 2005-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was really, really good! The way you conveyed how broken Mustang was was a bit heartwrenching. I was starting to get a little teary when Hawkeye broke down. TT_TT Great job! though, pathetic me, i only now read the title correctly. Before, I thought it just said "Birthday". XD |
| RocKofAgeS 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseholy ** you made me cry! god, that was ** sad! really really really good job! omg, good job! speechless, i am so utterly speechless. now, if you'll excuse me, i'm going to go cry myself to sleep. excellent job! |