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| Soraya Tenshi 2008-10-11 ch 21, | abuseI TOTALLY LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORIES! (: |
| Annie 2008-10-01 ch 21, anon. | abuseHUMPH. It's been, like, 2 years. If that was the last chapter, I will be seriously ** off. Look, I can do a good summary of it: Sasuke buys a ** and sics it on Itachi. =P WRITE DAMN YOU! Please?? Oh, and btw, 9.9/10 XD |
| CamiUchiha 2008-09-27 ch 21, | abuseOMG! The end of this chapter was so sad! :( You SERIOUSLY have to update soon. Like, no lie. I'm dying to know what happens next! This story is flippin AMAZING so far! I liked the smex. XD And Sasuke's character is perfect! Please update soon! I really gotta know what happens next! A HUGE fan, Cami. |
| cutecrazyice 2008-09-25 ch 21, | abuseREALLY liking this story. It's AU with such a familiarity to it that I just couldn't resist. Heh. :) |
| Emily R. 2008-09-20 ch 21, anon. | abuseThis... This is what I've been LOOKING FOR! Truely amazing! How did you write this? It's just perfect! I actually cried after reading chapter 21...T^T ((I never cry...XP)) Wow! You are my savior of Fan Fics! |
| Blitzfanatic 2008-09-18 ch 21, | abuseamazing |
| xteenuh102593 2008-09-12 ch 21, | abuseo0o0o wow intense haha i cant wait for the next one =] |
| Mooncake 2008-09-10 ch 21, | abuseWow...pretty intense there. This isn't the usual type of story I read so I'm surprised I made it all the way here. Nice job, i like it. |
| sunny 2008-09-05 ch 21, anon. | abuseYOU PROMISED. You said a fast upadte man! Come on!! I'm still coming here everyday! Sunny drugged-on-anime. |
| lostsoulMiakis 2008-09-05 ch 21, | abuseLoved it! Cant wait for the next chapter. |
| randomteenager 2008-09-03 ch 21, | abuseWhee! Just read through all 21 chapters. I remember finding this story long ago, but I guess I never had the time to read it. I'm glad I finally did, though. It's so very entertaining! I love it. The 'smex scene', as you so call it, was... subtle, but in a good way. It was cute. Overall, I look forward to reading the rest. I think Sakura's and Sasuke's relationship developed in a gradual pace, and I think that was good. Honestly, I didn't even realize I was reading chapter 21! I think it's good that you let, also, Sasuke and Sakura's relationship grow slowly but surely by not letting them be with each other every moment of every day, you know? By Sasuke "checking in" on her every few days or whenever he goes to see her, it makes the reader anxious to know what's going to happen, since it only happens every so often, and that's what I admire about this story! Hope you find some time to update. And, ugh, tell me about it. Senior year? Stress stress stress! hahaha, anyway, hope you update sometime! In the meantime, hope the real world isn't too ** ya xD Good luck on College Apps and SATs! Oh wait, maybe you already got through with those. Oh well, hope you get into a good college is what I mean, I guess! Nice vocabulary and writing style, by the way. Allright, long review is done! :) |
| crimsonPET 2008-08-24 ch 21, | abuseGWAGH. This fiction is just plain addicting. And dark. I love it. Great job with this ! I hope you update soon - I'll be waiting. |
| WildCherryLollipop 2008-08-23 ch 21, | abusethis is soo good i cant believe you havent updated! |
| Sakura Uchiha123 2008-08-20 ch 21, | abuseu know i've read this story before and then i lost it after i finished reading chapter 20 and now when i find it agn am shocked to know that it was updated which rocks for me lol this time am gonna keep it in my fav list of stories so when the next chapter will be updated i can read it anyway update soon plz it's been like 5 months that u didn't updated and i wanna know what will happen now between sasuke and sakura |
| xXNejiluverXx 2008-08-11 ch 21, | abuseohayo! yes, im a newcomer to your fanfic, but i have to say that...it's amazing! it's incredible how you took the basic plot/storyline (whatever it's called :)) of the manga/anime and then applied it to your fanfic. brilliant. :) does it sound like im overexaggerating? because im not. :D the only bad thing is that, from what i've gathered from your A/N (author notes) is that, your update speed...well, sucks. :\ but alas, no fanfic can be perfect, for we are all, dare i say, human. :\ (overdramatic? blame it on the coffee. and chocolate.XD) but seriously, sasuke. is. such. a. BASTARD. i mean, what kind of a guy leaves a hot girl, brokenhearted, after all that? honestly! Sakura should have stood up and slapped him across his pretty face. XD (really Sasuke, im disappointed in you. you let me down.) ah well, i hope sakura at least, has a happy ending, if nothing else. (maybe after sasuke kills itachi, he'll find her only to realize she's married! mwuahahaha! take that sasuke!) er, right other than my outbursts and probably annoyingly long rambles (i figured you deserved one beacause my laziness prevents me from doing consistent reviews. XD so i might not review next time, but i'll always be reading them. XD) and finally, to end this ridicuously long review, keep updating!! |