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AWW! THIS IS SO SWEET. HE TRIES HIS BEST TO BE GENTLE. IT'S JUST SO ADORABLE! SASUSAKU 4EVER!

nice metaphor. i do like your writing style. good wokr. :]

What a metaphor.

That was a very sweet fic, which is very nice to see in a lemon.

I think you did a good job of conveying what a happier relationship between the two would be like, and I love how you made Sasuke be gentle in his own way.

Really, quite nice.

AWESOME

Nice and brief. Good job!

hn.

i thought ur stry sucked bec of d summary (no offence) but it was really nice! i luv it!

great story i hope you will write another story it will be great this story was very interesting

one word: WOW!

I love Sasuke's gentleness. He is being so gentle to Sakura. Although I don't know why he wants to do that in the garden, he probably wants to find a human side of him by being gentle(?). Oh, I'm not sure if you know what I'm talking about. I don't think I know, either. Anyway, Sasuke should not just leave her lying outside, in the garden, when he finishes with what he wants.

Wow! that was really good!

CUUTE

i like it