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Reviews For: Dead To You

SummingUpTheStars
2008-09-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseAny chance of a prequel? See what happened to lead up to this, and how is Megaman taking it?
ZeroSabreMaster
2007-06-03
ch 1,
abuseWow...very nicely written, and it gives us an interesting look at a side of Dr. Wily's personality not often seen (actually, come to think of it, Dr. Wily hardly ever gets to show personality).
dark emperor vegeta
2006-10-12
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great story!! I hope you write some more. keep up the good work!
MikariStar
2006-06-21
ch 1,
abuseAw poor Protoman he's my favorite. This was very well written.
Take Down
2006-06-11
ch 1,
abuseWhoo! Third person from Peacekeeper that i've tracked down! Keep writin!
PixelMage
2005-07-22
ch 1,
abuseWow... Great story. Sad too... I was like 'WTF?' then i got it. Poor Blues..
Burenda
2005-06-25
ch 1,
abuseAw... Poor Protoman... *huggles*

This was a good story, even though it was a deathfic of one of my favorite characters. =P I liked seeing how Wily really thinks about and treats Proto, and how sometimes the two (thoughts and actions) conflict with each other. And I liked seeing how Proto might react if Wily ever did something that led to his death (although this probably isn't really Proto speaking, but just Wily's mind).

I kind of wish I knew how Proto had died, but maybe it's for the best. I also wish I could have seen it happen, seen how Wily and everyone reacted to it... But that would have turned this one-shot into a full-length fic. *grins*

Only one nitpick: “Then what do you want to hear?” he whispered. “An apology? A plead for mercy?” ((That should be plea, not plead.))

Overall, great job, Atreyu! ^_^
Summing up the Stars
2005-06-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was cool! Like all your other work. But it also was a little tiny bit confusing. But still very very good. ^^
Crystalstorm
2005-06-19
ch 1,
abuseGreat fic. I liked reading it. Poor Proto. Ja.
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