 SummingUpTheStars 2008-09-14 . chapter 1 Any chance of a prequel? See what happened to lead up to this, and how is Megaman taking it? |
 ZeroSabreMaster 2007-06-03 . chapter 1Wow...very nicely written, and it gives us an interesting look at a side of Dr. Wily's personality not often seen (actually, come to think of it, Dr. Wily hardly ever gets to show personality). |
 dark emperor vegeta 2006-10-12 . chapter 1This is a great story!! I hope you write some more. keep up the good work! |
 MikariStar 2006-06-21 . chapter 1Aw poor Protoman he's my favorite. This was very well written. |
 Take Down 2006-06-11 . chapter 1Whoo! Third person from Peacekeeper that i've tracked down! Keep writin! |
 PixelMage 2005-07-22 . chapter 1Wow... Great story. Sad too... I was like 'WTF?' then i got it. Poor Blues.. |
 Burenda 2005-06-25 . chapter 1Aw... Poor Protoman... *huggles*
This was a good story, even though it was a deathfic of one of my favorite characters. =P I liked seeing how Wily really thinks about and treats Proto, and how sometimes the two (thoughts and actions) conflict with each other. And I liked seeing how Proto might react if Wily ever did something that led to his death (although this probably isn't really Proto speaking, but just Wily's mind).
I kind of wish I knew how Proto had died, but maybe it's for the best. I also wish I could have seen it happen, seen how Wily and everyone reacted to it... But that would have turned this one-shot into a full-length fic. *grins*
Only one nitpick: “Then what do you want to hear?” he whispered. “An apology? A plead for mercy?” ((That should be plea, not plead.))
Overall, great job, Atreyu! ^_^ |
 Summing up the Stars 2005-06-19 . chapter 1That was cool! Like all your other work. But it also was a little tiny bit confusing. But still very very good. ^^ |
 Crystalstorm 2005-06-19 . chapter 1Great fic. I liked reading it. Poor Proto. Ja. |