Short but sweet, believable, and enjoyable dialogue. I love classic PS fan fiction (i.e. not PSO) and I want to post my own but I have to wait 3 days (I just joined on). I'd love nothing more than for old school phantasy star fanfic to make a comeback but it's probably a pipe dream.

Good stuff!

Periodically, someone remembers the wonderful game that is PSIV. And very rarely, someone writes a good fic in that fandom. This is one of those times.

The one complaint: I wish you set the scene a bit more in the beggining. Otherwise, the conversation was great, and it was an enjoyable, mostly grammitcally correct, read.

Go Alys Rune nuff said

good story. I like the pairings you choose

hantasy Star 4: End of the Millennium is my favorite game! Great story Rune Alys 4 ever