 xyzisme 2008-11-03 . chapter 22I like this story - the previous chapter was so unexpected. BUT this chapter is really unclear. Why isn't Zuko staying with them. Anyway, great job! |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 22 Classic Zutara. Can't get any better than that. Wonderful fan fiction. It only took me about fifteen minutes altogether, but it was a wonderful fifteen minutes. I hope to read some of your other things too.
Cheers mate,
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 21 I hate it when people [no offense to some of my favourite writers] make Katara and Zuko forget each other. Thanks so much for making them REMEMBER each other. I can't wait to read the epilogue. It's just three clicks away...
Cheers mate,
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 20 Gosh! Why do the "Zuko-getting-stabbed-and-Katara-crying-over-him" fan fics get me to the point where I'm blubbering and rocking back and forth in my computer chair? It's so immature, I know, but when you live for Zutara, that tends to happen.
Great job.
Cheers mate,
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 19 It's so hard to imagine Aang serious, but all you have to do is watch "Day of Black Sun" and you get all the proof you can get.
Good chapter.
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 18 Other than the SEVERAL grammatical errors that I found in this chapter [and I am sure that the whole story is filled with them] this was a good chappy.
Cheers mate,
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 17 Oh! Bad news for Zutara!
Why, Sokka? Why?
Cheers,
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 16 Awesome, dude.
Cheers mate,
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 15 Another one of the things about Zuko's character is when he gets his scar healed...assuming he does get his scar healed. People portray him in all sorts of ways. But the word "happily", forgive me, does not fit his character description. It should be something less simple, but not so emo-ish, ya know? It's hard writing Zuko.
Cheers mate,
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 14 Wow. What I find hard about writing Zutara is that you never know what Zuko's personality will be like after he is...ya know...hooked up with Katara. People can't really imagine him all happy or mushy, but I think that you did a great job portraying his character. You can sort of make it your own but still need to keep the same character. You rock!
Celestia White |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 13 ZUTARA! Now I see why Zutara-Princess was totally freaking out! You rock, girl!
Cheers mate,
Celestia |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 12 Oh, the necklace. Well, this was a cool chapter. No other comments or criticism is necessary.
Cheers mate,
Celestia
PS. "Stargate Atlantis" Rules! |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 11 No comment.
Cheers,
Celestia |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 10 Aw, she's having second thoughts. Classic Zutara!
Cheers man,
Celestia, the girl who just found out Katara was having second thoughts |
 Celestia White 2008-02-22 . chapter 9 Luv it! Oh, by the way, Hannah Montana has a voice like a robot! That was random, I know. Sokka is back! Waho! Gotta luv my Sokka!
Cheers mate,
Celestia White |