Wow. All I can say is...Wow. It was really poetic. Though I'm a sucker for the macabre and gothic. It was one of those pieces where you don't get the full meaning the first time you read it. You have to go back and examine the connotations and underlying meaning as well as face value. Well done. Definately one of my favorites.

“What a skeletal wreck of woman you are. Translucent flesh and feeble bones, the kind of temple where the whores and villains try to tempt the holistic domes. We all have a little sin that needs venting. Do you serve a purpose Granger, or purposely serve? Relax, set your mind free, because in the end everything we do, is just everything we’ve done.”

BEST part of the story so far

Try not to use extreamly big words. one paragraph i didn't get at all because i didnt know the meaning of the words. Most people arn't as smart as you seem to be. I will keep in touch with this story. contiune with it, please

mucho love,

Stella