Hi, I'm just re-reading your story, sorry about not reviewing last time but I can never think of anything to say except, 'this is good, I like it'. But in this case I found something I think you might have missed.

Most, Bluestreak included, would lost this bet.

This bit looks like it needs a have between the would and lost or the lost changed to loose(sp?)

I've always really liked this series for the little bits of life it shows, in particular I love the Sunstreaker one, it's very sweet.

If Hot Spot actually had four sisters instead I'm sure he'd feel differently. PMS anyone?

A most amusing chapter! *snickerfits*

poor Hotspot.

this was good.

wow, i finally got them all read! I very much enoy reading these. I can't wait for the next chapter =)

Metroplex is cool!

-chuckles-

even i can't stand to hear all the gory detail or someone saying i had to get shots today. -shudders-

i hate needles.

Sideswipe saved the day. yay

that was pretty cool!

wow. poor First Aid.

this was good =)

no one should under estimate anyone.

uh oh. wheeljack is in trouble.

oh poor little girl.

and remind me to never get on the bad side of Beachcomber.

poor cosmos. he was only tryin to help.

the wind was their enemy this time.

im glad that Ratchet will show some sense in Cliffjumper. I don't like him. He can be a jerk but this was good =)

this was good =)