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JenniferJ
2009-05-27 . chapter 3
Hi, I'm just re-reading your story, sorry about not reviewing last time but I can never think of anything to say except, 'this is good, I like it'. But in this case I found something I think you might have missed.

Most, Bluestreak included, would lost this bet.

This bit looks like it needs a have between the would and lost or the lost changed to loose(sp?)

I've always really liked this series for the little bits of life it shows, in particular I love the Sunstreaker one, it's very sweet.
Kittona
2009-05-13 . chapter 27
If Hot Spot actually had four sisters instead I'm sure he'd feel differently. PMS anyone?

A most amusing chapter! *snickerfits*
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 27
poor Hotspot.

this was good.

wow, i finally got them all read! I very much enoy reading these. I can't wait for the next chapter =)
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 26
Metroplex is cool!
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 25
-chuckles-

even i can't stand to hear all the gory detail or someone saying i had to get shots today. -shudders-

i hate needles.
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 24
Sideswipe saved the day. yay
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 23
that was pretty cool!
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 22
wow. poor First Aid.
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 21
this was good =)

no one should under estimate anyone.
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 17
uh oh. wheeljack is in trouble.
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 13
oh poor little girl.

and remind me to never get on the bad side of Beachcomber.
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 12
poor cosmos. he was only tryin to help.
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 11
the wind was their enemy this time.
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 9
im glad that Ratchet will show some sense in Cliffjumper. I don't like him. He can be a jerk but this was good =)
flamingmarsh
2008-12-09 . chapter 7
this was good =)
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