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| Morgrid of the Shadow 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS STORY, great writing, im writing a fic with my char, cynn keeps trying to kill him. is t me or are all the main char crazy? |
| Fynhavir Leveque 2006-02-25 ch 2, | abuseI REALLY like this. I'm very fond of the original Guild Wars characters, and I think you've done a good job of portraying them. Cynn is very cool ;) Good story; you're a great writer. ~Fyn |
| BobTheReporterIReporteveryo... 2006-01-11 ch 2, | abuseGo to BARNEY LAND AND U WILL FIND A BETTERS STORY THERE |
| BobTheReporterIReporteveryo... 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseBLAH BLAH BLHA BLHA BLHA BLHA U SUK CYNN IS UGLY UGLY |
| DaggerPen 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseWhen are you finally going to update? I believe that I read this story a while ago, but couldn't review because I didn't have an account yet. In fact, I'm pretty sure that was the case. |
| Ray Venn Hakubi 2005-12-06 ch 2, | abuseI love this. I hope you do expand it eventually (even if you haven't done so for six months, you did say chapterS...) If you go any further with the shoujou-ai though, I'm going to have to insist on an Aidan/Mhenlo or Mhenlo/Rurik pairing as well. Otherwise it's just not fair. ;) |
| Draknal 2005-11-21 ch 2, | abuseWow. Good story. This is the first Guild Wars one that I have read. You portrayed the characters very well. Each person was themself, except for Mhenlo, he is usually more calm than that. The fighting, and differetn conditions displayed (poison, crippled, exhaustion, etc.) were also well written. If you update this story, I will gladly read more of it! |
| Vivli 2005-08-29 ch 2, | abuseWhoa, dark ending! I really hope you continue this, it'll be very interesting to see where you take the characters. I kinda forgive Cynn for being really rude in the game now with all that behind her. Trapped for a week and a half? That's unimaginable... Anyway, really well written. Something's very odd about seeing Cynn vulnerable...Anyway, this was simply fantastic! |
| Vivli 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was simply fantastic. The writing was flawless and the storyline was really interesting. I read a bit of the offical lore, and always thought what happened to Cynn would be interesting to write a story about, and you did it brilliantly. I'm normally a horrible person to have reviewing because if I can find anything to criticise I will, but in this case, I can't. That was simply brilliant. I can't wait until I have time to read the next chapter! I also know this story seems to be quite old, so I don't know if you're still updating it, but you still deserve to be told how good it was. |
| AreteSeren 2005-06-24 ch 2, | abuseyou are a pioneer! (in more ways than one) and a good one at that. I hope you continue onward! |
| hA-Nephy 2005-06-24 ch 2, | abusehmm nice story so far. cant wait for more! ^_^ |
| TSAdmiral 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed reading the official Guild Wars lore and I dare say this is an excellent complement to those writings. Excellent start, please continue! |
| sdfsdfsdsfd 2005-06-22 ch 2, | abuseAWESOME STORY, plz rite more and also in the future chapters kan u plz put in a necromancer? kus i luv necromancers and also will there be any pairings? |
| Iliketshirts 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseGood story so far nice and detailed you fill in the hole where the Guild Wars staff left. |