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Stargirlrox
2008-09-27 . chapter 13
This was a fun story to read! I'm sorry it's over, although you're probably not. :) Nice Author's Note! Nice and long. Can't wait for your next story!
Invader Zyla
2008-08-14 . chapter 13
I remember reading this in '06 summer. i didnt have an account so, i couldnt comment. I nolonger really like this show (sorry)but, i still think about this story, and i really enjoid reading it!!

im gald you wrote this, and you did a really great job. i figured since i have an account now, i should thank you!! so, thanks!! i enjoied this alot. and, so here is the thanks you deserve from me! AND I NOW PRESENT YOUR GRAMMY!
Marie
2008-02-17 . chapter 11
It's spelled H-a-l-l-e-l-u-j-a-h.
Marie
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
O. M. G. No. Way. Zuko isn't that cruel! He can't be! He became to hot in Season Three to be so cruel! Never!
Summer's Frost
2007-12-13 . chapter 13
thisstory was great the only character that was ooc was momo hahahha this was almost like a real episode good job im impressed this was actually better than a real episode almost wow i agree withkataangnuttybabe that every fanfic tries to make katara fall in love with aang immediatly aangs character was really deep you best write more or else lol but really write more stories this rocked
jliljj
2007-10-22 . chapter 6
THIS CHAPTER IS PROBLY DEAD OLD BUT I STILL HAVE TO SAY THAT I LIKED THE DIFF IN THE I LOVE U PART IT WERENT LIKE " I LOVE U AND I LOVE U TOO AANG" IT WAS MORE LIKE " I LOVE U AND HOW THE HELL DID U GET TO THAT CONCLUSION SORTA THING " ANY WAY YH IT WAS GOOD
hyperactivefreak
2007-06-02 . chapter 13
aw very cute gr8 job
KataangNutyBabe
2007-05-03 . chapter 13
Okay, how can fluff burn? Come on, it's fluff.

Anyway, great story you've got here. I know I'm probably too late to get that virtually delicious virtual cookie (hee hee, that sounds stupid) but I'll try.

I really enjoyed how deep Aang became in this story. While I know he is fictional (sob!), he has a lot of serious issues and someday Brian and Mike will give him an Avatar pyschologist.

Katara--just as the real Katara might be on the show. In the fanfictional world, Katara is often too ready to be with Aang, because it's easieri for the author to write about. We've all done that. But in this story Katara is unsure because of the difficulties of being in love with a 12/112 year old Avatar with issues. Thankfully, she finally realizes how she really feels about Aang.

Sokka-little to speak of. In Kataang stories, Sokka is often pushed into the background. Usually this helps the relationship, but even if you don't like him he is an essential Avatar character. He may be as important as Momo someday (lol).

Zuko-nice to know that he still thinks about Episode Thirteen. I loved how Kuzon was a girl in this, because we always assume that Kuzon was a boy and therefore not Zuko's relation. Zuko is a little OOC here, with kissing Katara and the whole cruelty thing. He isn't that evil, though the B of BSS (battle of Ba Sing Se) proved otherwise to several fans.

Appa-barely heard about in this story. Truly, Appa was not that essential until he was bisonnapped in Season Two. But that really showed the connection between Appa and Aang. The poisoned arrow helped to keep Appa in the dark most of the time.

Momo-no comment.

This story was original, funny, sad, romantic, and engaging (not that way, I'm straight!). I hope you keep writing fanfiction for years to come (or at least weeks).

Loyal to Kataang forever, KataangNuttyBabe (Abby)

Now can I have that virtual cookie?
victoria
2007-04-18 . chapter 1
I know you might not get to read this as you have finished your fanfic but i really like your fanfic, it's made me laugh, cry, feel sad and very happy, not many fanfic's can do that to me, hey not even many noticed author's books can do that to me. you have major skills, i hope you keep writting fanfics, esecially avatar ones.

Victoria.
kataang fan for ever.
Avatara
2007-03-17 . chapter 13
I loved it! I had to get off a few times between readings and couldn't get on for DAYS I almost died. I couldn't stop thinking about it. You are such a good writer. I'm embarresed to even call myself a Avatar fanfic writer after reading this. Thanks for such an awsome story!
azulas#1fan14
2007-01-12 . chapter 13
OMG! I so totally L-O-V-E-D loved ur story! seriosly it rocked out loud! virtual prize 4 best story evr! Lol! welps its 11 o clock at night n i gots 2 go!
music_bender
2006-12-29 . chapter 5
DUDE! Zuko's like... PERVERTED!
Probatio Pennae
2006-12-10 . chapter 1
Wow! this is one of the first fanfics I've read and it is still, to this day, the best complete Kataang fanfic. You are a talented writer.
aangyboy
2006-12-07 . chapter 13
Wow amazing fanfic best one i've ever read plz make more chpters ireally liked all the fluff
sunkana
2006-10-17 . chapter 8
Your writing is great! And I can actually picture the characters doing those things, unlike some of the other stories.I can't wait to read the rest of the story!
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