Apologies for the anon comment, but I can't seem to remember my password!

I read the entire fic at work yesterday (and partly again today), and I am so impressed it hurts. The plot is well-thought through, the characters are highly believable and I love the elder Potters. And Snape, of course, but I doubt that one needed saying. How very typical of James to be so cold to him, in spite of the state he's in! I like how you actually get him to grow, though, and, in some way, the rest of the Marauders as well, thought perhaps not to the same extent.
Even though I'm a slash-fan art heart, I'm so glad that this isn't another "oh you've been raped let me heal you by having sex with you" story, although from the first phrases, it was rather obvious that it wouldn't be (since you also use correct grammar and punctuation, which is a rare treat today!). :)
A scenario like this is infinately more believable and heart-warming. Very, very well done.

Brilliant. I enjoyed this!

I'm glad you finished this tory till the end it's really rather good^_^ Severus' struggles are obvious and I'm glad you didn't make him into a nancy:P He's still sarcastic and snapish but we get to his his problems and his issues. THe bit with slughorn made me realise the only reason he ever called on snape was so slytherin could get house points. He was such a dick, he should have realised a slave wouldn't have a wand. What a jerk. I like how you alluded to the fact that Peter is Quite literally and figuratively a Rat. Lily was very judgemental and quick to assume things about James. If she honestly thought he was that terrible why on earth would she date him anyways. I liked how you showed that memory too, Remus and Sirius' reactions were what i expected. Peter's too becaue of how you had portrayed him from the beginning. All and all this is a well written fic and i'm glad you beta nagged you:P

Oh, wow. This fic...I loved every second of it. Some parts made my gut clench in disgust for the things Snape went through. I also loved the entire James-is-finally browing up ark. Very, very well done.

Wow.

I started reading this story in french - i'm french, so my english isn't very good, sorry.

It's good, really. A little scaring. A little sad

Definitively a good story.

kisses

K.

i really loved it!

It's over!?! Severus was never freed? Aww... :(

This story is dark and different and wonderful to read. I enjoyed it a lot.

that was a great story! though i wish you would write more to free severus! please? -puppy eyes- do it for the lolz~!

peter is a prat *takes out shot gun* muahahahahaha!

This was a really, really unique story, and it was rather entertaining. Strange, but entertaining.

yeah this is genius ! I LOVE THIS ! good that u didn't miss out snape's "snarkiness" :)

o.m.g.
i love your story
...i don't know what i can wrote
(sry for my bad english...:D)

I really, really liked this story. Alot...

This looks really interesting. will we learn why this happened?