Is there a part 2?

Cool i like it but seriously put a new chapter

You need to research your subjects better. I think Maureen would likely become a captain of her own tug first. So she would have the rank of captain when this stroy started. Othr then that its good. It mkes you want to find out more, and that a great thing.

I thought this was an excellent story. It fits exactly were the first one left off. If they made a second one it would probably be just like what was written. My only complaint was that it could of had a little better grammar

Great start...I'm interested! Please update soon.

Hey, Good Chapter...Keep writin!

Wow this is a good one! What's on the side of the paper? Is it the 'mark'? Write more!