I liked reading your fic, but I had trouble reading it, you had a lot of grammar errors, it was still very good.

THAT WAS AN AWESOME STORY! W00T! _

*twitch* this chapter was...interesting, but i really liked the other chpaters! keep it up! _

I'm sorry but this story got SO off the whole "Twisted Whispers" title thing. I may have said this before, but, damn it! It went from a sudisic, evillish, twisted kinda fic into this mushy lovey story! As far as the lovey story goes, seperated from the first chapters, was REALLY good. Its just.. SO off topic, ya know? But other than that, it was awesome. Even thought I HATE Pan, I loved this fic. Thanks!

cool story

Not to bother you with nonsensical stuff but...

...Why is it that in the chapter you write it properly, "whispers", and in the fanfic title it's "wispers"? xD

Anyway, gotta hate that idiotic bitch Marron... I hope she dies at the end of the fic. -.- Lol, excuse my sadistical nature. xD

i'm to young to be married so skipping the lemon was a good idea. anywho update soon!1

This fanfic sure went down. It went from a twisted, devious fic, to one of those icky romance fics. Oh well, its still a pretty good deal. As much as I hate TxP (As i'm sure i've said), this story is gettin better and better! YAY UPDATES!

GM

YES I WANT A SEQUEL FOR THIS STORY ITS JUST SO GOOD! *cries her eyes out bcopz shes happy for Pan* let me warn you IF THERE IS NO SEQUEL ILL SCREAM A TERRIBLE SCREAM! _ _

*laughs at Chapter 4* HAHAHAHAHA! *laughs at Vegetas funny comments* y tats funneh lol

i love the first chapter and everything and im hoping that the rest of the story will be just as good. The only down side is that you didnt really explain why Marron lied to Truns about her boyfriend and why shes using him in the first place people dont just use others for the sake of it there must be a reason

Apart from that its really good and keep up the good work

That was a good chappie about the new sayian on the way so update soon

EW! Nothing more than PanXTrunks disqusts me, but, other than that, this is a really good chapter. If i was at TxP fan, this fanfic would be definetly on the favorites list. Not that its not..but.. err.. never mind. Great!

Wo! Another good chapter!

swet..

That was a good chappie update soon