Cal, this is the first time you've ever written something like this! It reminds me of a couple of mine that you haven't read yet...I love it. Aside from the last paragraph...(you know my views) it was absolutely wonderful. You're amazing and you know it. -Sidhe

Erm...wow?

And you've done it again! Great work Calvin!

quite good

That was very moving, but who's speaking?

Really good poem! Only who is speaking?