Update dagnabbit!

Very cute and funny. Update soon ^_^.

um... isn't Niime canas's 60-70 year old mother? well otherwise i think first chapter was the best, sorry i didn't understand much of the rest.

Love it!! Good Humor2!

Hahahahahaha, it's very funny. How interesting...Florina is acting weird and people hate Nino, poor kid. It seems Jaffar is the only who remains intact and is unmoved the craziness of the group. Keep it up!

HM, I must say that was very deep and very interesting, write more ok.

Woa deep. Having your best friend die...very hard, I wonder if Yahn will be alright, if not -makes snapping sound-

Karel:...

Nightmare: No comforting words?

Karel: A warrior is always faced with death, those to weak feel its cold grasp should not fight.

Nightmare: -sweatdrop-

Anyway I enjoyed it, though Jaffars reaction was a bit wierd, you'd think he'd be hugging Yahn for offering to help get Nino back...

Yay! Finally a longer chapter...good for you. :D

Believe me I love it when characters are just minding their own business and are getting spied on or interupted, believe me I am having my own fun with that on my own story, is the dark haired girl Nino?

Florina! Whoa, hey let me glomp Hector too! ...sorry ahem, now that would be a brutal image two women glomping Hector? now great job with the humor and there is always a way to find humor in something. Especially with the age groups Fire Emblem has characters in,...and why does Matthew hate Nino? Did she pull a practical joke or something on him?

Hey I don't mind action at all, and action can be really fun to write, and read , Have you ever read any RA Salvatore, he is really quite good at describing fights, of the sword and shield or dual scimatar variety... not bad, Like I said I don't mind action but love comeddy too,

i did notice some humor though and what I did find was good, and whoever took Nino is way more money hungry than Serra and Farina combined...now that is a scary thought...and I just got an idea for something to go wrong in my story...

Very interesting, write more ok.

...that seemed a bit rushed. You should put clearly defined marks where scenes are switched so as not to confuse people as well.

This is keeping to the fic by being strange and yet still entertainging.

That song has freaked me out, I'm off to go and build a bomb shelter.