i'm satisfied...

hm...
i like how the past chapters were written...
along with the drama it encased...
but this chapter didn't seem to fit like the past ones...

Aww! That just made my holiday.

Very OOC, and it's moving much too fast - Spike didn't even have time to get over Julia's death and suddenly he's kissing Faye on the forehead? And wanting to get married and have kids?? Eh..

And I know it doesn't really matter, but it's 'bellpeppers and beef' not the other way around - but that's just me nit-picking 'cause I'm anal like that.

I do like that it's pro Faye + Spike, and your actual writing isn't terrible, it just seems like you skipped a lot and aren't paying attention to the characters' personalities.

Oh dear, Faye-Faye's been kidnapped...

mitora.

Interesting turn of events. I defantly like Spike with Faye and not Julia- I really don't like her! Update soon

Nice fic! Are you going to continue? I hope so! Keep it up!

** A ! UPDATE OR I WILL GO ** INSANE !

love .
jadedghostgurl

lol -> awesome story

Faye and her dept huh? Bloody woman! But I kinda like were this is going so update soon kay

Very good chapter. ^_^

mitora.

WE CAN ONLY BE PATIENT FOR SO LONG DAMNIT !!1 THIS STORY OS TOO GOD TO HAVE TO WAIR FOR. SO UPDATE GODD DAMNIT !

I love it, please update soon!

woot! Update!

Aw! He kissed her on the forehead (I think that's how you spell it) how cute!

that last line almost got me... i thought it was over till i read the bottom of the page lol... i love this story because its a different approach of a faye and spike story.. well to me it is.. thanks for updating.. keep up the good work and i cant wait for the next chapters