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| Meadowcroft 2007-11-25 ch 7,  | abuseAww! That just made my holiday. |
| Shari Joy Rose 2007-10-12 ch 4, | abuseVery OOC, and it's moving much too fast - Spike didn't even have time to get over Julia's death and suddenly he's kissing Faye on the forehead? And wanting to get married and have kids?? Eh.. And I know it doesn't really matter, but it's 'bellpeppers and beef' not the other way around - but that's just me nit-picking 'cause I'm anal like that. I do like that it's pro Faye + Spike, and your actual writing isn't terrible, it just seems like you skipped a lot and aren't paying attention to the characters' personalities. |
| MitoraAkamori 2005-09-26 ch 5, | abuseOh dear, Faye-Faye's been kidnapped... mitora. |
| Aeris Striffe 2005-09-26 ch 5, | abuseInteresting turn of events. I defantly like Spike with Faye and not Julia- I really don't like her! Update soon |
| Tsubacci 2005-09-09 ch 4, | abuseNice fic! Are you going to continue? I hope so! Keep it up! |
| jadedghostgurl 2005-09-09 ch 4, | abuse** A ! UPDATE OR I WILL GO ** INSANE ! love . jadedghostgurl lol -> awesome story |
| svs 2005-09-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseFaye and her dept huh? Bloody woman! But I kinda like were this is going so update soon kay |
| MitoraAkamori 2005-09-04 ch 4, | abuseVery good chapter. ^_^ mitora. |
| jadedghostgurl 2005-09-01 ch 3, | abuseWE CAN ONLY BE PATIENT FOR SO LONG DAMNIT !!1 THIS STORY OS TOO GOD TO HAVE TO WAIR FOR. SO UPDATE GODD DAMNIT ! |
| Lady Amira 2005-09-01 ch 3, | abuseI love it, please update soon! |
| TheEvilAshleyness 2005-08-17 ch 3, | abusewoot! Update! |
| lilpinkpookie 2005-08-17 ch 3, | abuseAw! He kissed her on the forehead (I think that's how you spell it) how cute! |
| BellpeppersAndBeef 2005-08-15 ch 3, | abusethat last line almost got me... i thought it was over till i read the bottom of the page lol... i love this story because its a different approach of a faye and spike story.. well to me it is.. thanks for updating.. keep up the good work and i cant wait for the next chapters |
| nusia 2005-08-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is a really awseom story. pleasee keep updating! |
| flyingturtle 2005-08-14 ch 3, | abusethat was a good chapter I want you to update soon!! |