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SlippingSanity
2006-12-02 . chapter 11
SlippingSanity : This is good! Personally, I like this the way it is. It leaves more to the imagination.

Rei : ...

Yuri : What's your problem?

Rei : I should have been in there with chaos!

Yuri : ...I'm sure you should have.k

Tai : Really? I would have thought that you would have wanted to be in there with Tori.

Kira : Tai!

Tai : Sorry!

Rei : Of course! (grabs Tori and some cement) Let's make a statue of us!

Tori : AH! Let go of me!

Kira : AH! Let go of him!

SlippingSanity : I want a picture of this!

Yuri : I want you all dead...
SlippingSanity
2006-03-18 . chapter 9
SlippingSanity : Holy crap chaos got raped!

Yuri : Are you going on about that, or the fact it was Hojo whom did it?

SlippingSanity : Both!

Tori : I know! That was a shock to my system!

Rei : Yep, didn't see that one comming! Ranchdressing, my dear,...

SlippingSanity, Yuri, and Tori : (thinking) 'My dear'?

Rei : You said you need a lemon? How about you write about *wraps arms around Tori's waist* what I'm about to do with Tori? *purrs in Tori's ear*

Tori : (deep red) N-No! There's not gonna be anything t-to write because nothing's a-about to ha-happ...*moans* *blinks and tries to fight* R-Rei stop! Get your tongue off my neck, and get your hands from inside my shirt!

Rei : *smirks* Okay...If you say so...

Tori : ACK! GET YOUR HANDS OUT OF MY PANTS! LET GO OF MY--*moans*

Yuri : ...My eyes are burning...*walking out while pulling SlippingSanity along*...Let's go...
crossmyheart
2006-03-09 . chapter 8
Kimmy: The hard way? The hard way?! What's the hard way?!! We must know!

Yami Kimmy: Yes! We have to know!

Kimmy: And I like the title for the chapters.

Yami Kimmy: Me too. Very dark

Kimmy: *nods while scooting away from her Yami*

Yami Kimmy: AND THE FINAL FANTASY VII CHARACTERS ARE IN HERE!! GOOD!!

Kimmy: *hangs up phone* and now that ive called the asylum...

Yami Kimmy: What?

Kimmy: I'd like to tell you this is good, and that we can not wait to read more. ^-^
SlippingSanity
2006-02-20 . chapter 8
SlippingSanity : I LOVE IT!!

Yuri : Very intresting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Rei : Brilliant! One question though, are Cloud and Vincent gonna jump Jr. if he doesn't talk? That would be *mouth gets covered by Tori's hand*

Tori : It's best to go through life ignoring him...

Yuri : *nods in agreement*

Rei : *breaks free by licking Tori's hand* How can you agree with Tori!

Yuri : I choose to NOT be an idiot.

Rei : I am NOT an idiot! I am very intelligent, don't you think so SlippingSanity?

SlippingSanity : ... *smiles and nods*

Rei : What was that for?! *rolls eyes* Whatever. At least Tori loves when I say 'certain things'.

Tori : What?!

Rei : *moans* Oh Tori! Don't stop! Have your way with me!

Tori : *blushing* Shut up! *starts attacking Rei*

SlippingSanity : I should stop that... *runs off to try to stop the violence, but only joins in and makes it worse*

Yuri : ...I hate dumbasses... *shakes head in disapproval* Great story you have going and I can't wait to read the next chapter when it comes out. Until next time... *walks the opposite way from the fighting because he doesn't want to be touched by the 'aura of idiocy' around Rei, Tori, and SlippingSanity*
SlippingSanity
2006-02-11 . chapter 7
I love your story, it's so descriptive (way more than I could ever get) I can picture everything and, at the risk of sounding like a sadist, I love what I see! chaos torture is so so sexy! *wolf whistle* I think it would be a good idea to have MOMO get kidnapped. A ticked off Jr. is awesome!

Rei: I agree.

SlippingSanity : You do?

Rei : Of course, a bloody chaos and a ** Jr! Sexy! Of course, no one is as sexy as my Tori. *snatches Tori from nowhere* Oh my Tori! *cuddles*

Tori : Hey! What are you doing?! Let go of me!

Rei : But I never grabbed you. *shrugs* I'll just have to now. *hands slide down into a very inappropiate place*

Tori : *blushes alot* G-Get your hand off of me!

Rei : *smirks*

SlippingSanity : Okay...anyways, Yuri, why don't you give your opinion?

Yuri : ...Interesting. I look forward to futher chapters in the NEAR future...

SlippingSanity : Well there you have it! We all love your story! (Even Tori, though he didn't get to say so ^-^') Anyway, we all hope that you continue and keep up the good work!
kikyogirl900
2005-12-26 . chapter 7
Yikes. Well, it's no problem. ^_^ Things happen eh? I have lost motivation and inspiration to write anymore on my fics. And I'm not sure I ever will. I hope you do write more though. I really like this fic!! I would have reveiwed sooner but my computer hasn't been working right lately. It's dying... :( Anyways, I really love this fic and no matter when you update I will read it. ^^ And I fully understand your problem. So take your time k. ^_^ See ya 'round.
HikariKikyo
2005-08-13 . chapter 5
*Hugs plushies*:D Glad I could help! ^_^

Anla's outfit sounds cool. (I would like to dress like that.) Hmm... all in all I loved the new chapter! Can't wait to read more! ^_^ *Hugs plushies again*
chaosxShion
2005-07-26 . chapter 4
Wow thats an awsome chappie! keep going please i really enjoy this story.
HikariKikyo
2005-07-25 . chapter 4
Perfect length! =^-^= Yep, I likey! Hmm... just a quistion, Are you going to like make it a c/OC fic? Again, just a quistion! It's cool if you do, cool if you don't! ^-^ Write more soon!
RubedoFan
2005-07-20 . chapter 3
I am liking this! Please update uh... do you mind making it longer XD It's kind of short if you ask me, but please don't take that the wrong way. I'm just so interested!
HikariKikyo
2005-07-20 . chapter 3
Your welcome!

Very good! Brovo! (audience appears out of nowhere and claps.) Ok, enough with the ghostly audience. (Audience disappears) The only thing i can think of is to make it longer.

I finally got my fic to work out! It is called sleepless beauty. read it if ya' want!

^-^ Peace out!
Foibles and Fables
2005-06-21 . chapter 2
Quoting the A/N from chapter 1:

"disclaimer:i don't own ANY of these characters...if i did,Shion would've already 'fessed her feelings about Allen up already..."

YOU'RE A SHIONxALLEN FAN!? OMG YEY! Check out my author's page for some ShionxAllen stories!

Great story!
HikariKikyo
2005-06-21 . chapter 1
Hm... This is really cool! Also, it's unique! Never raed anything like it! Keep up the good work and please write more soon!

This is how you spell gaignun.
I also like your name! ^-^
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