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Avalon's Protector
2008-10-03
ch 9,
abuseThis is such a beautiful story. I have reread it probably over a dozen times since it came out and it has brought me to tears on a number of occasions.

This is one of the great works of the fandom as well as probably one of the most realistic and heart-wrenching portrayals of whatever possible future relationship could develop.

I bow my head before your awesomeness and in supplication... please please do not abandon this fic!

As a fellow fanfiction author I can appreciate how hectic life gets. But it's been over a year! Such a wonderful story deserves some closure.
Anita509
2008-09-25
ch 9,
abuseoh no!! it broke my heart..pliz continue with this story!
NightsMist
2008-08-31
ch 9,
abuseplease update!
please please please!
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Icezera
2008-08-10
ch 9,
abuseI really enjoy your writing style and how mature it is. That's basically all i have to say. Hope u keep updating!
Starlight Gundam
2008-08-03
ch 9,
abuseSo I stumbled upon this story after reading another of yours. Its very good, I wish you would continue it.
Foxtale3
2008-06-06
ch 9,
abuseAck!! No!! Please update this soon! This is tortuous! What about Relena and Heero? Will there be a happy ending? Or at least a content, poignant ending with Heero riding off into the sunset? Please, please update soon!
Foxtale3
2008-06-05
ch 4,
abuseAgain, I am impressed with your in-depth knowledge of Heero and relationships. Your analysis of how he works seems as if you know him personally. You take on relationships is incredibly knowledgeable. One line in particular stood out to me: "It was a cruel joke that the sexual exploration that he thought about abstractedly as selfish and emotionally distant would turn out to be so fundamentally relational." Wow. How true. How refreshing to see such a realistic take on sex and relationships in a fanfic. Bravo!
Foxtale3
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseWow. I am really impressed. Your analysis of the situation between Relena and Heero in the first few paragraphs is admirable, while your descriptions of what they were feeling while they were drinking is incredibly realistic and well written. I am so glad you decided to continue this, only b/c I can't wait to see what you do next and what else your wonderful writing will reveal!
Honourable Fool
2008-05-25
ch 9,
abuseOh, you cruel, cruel woman! And you haven't updated this in almost a year? Please update soon! I love the way you write the two of them! They are so... oh! it's perfect! I want to know if they'll get back together again! I just know she's going to say yes to Calhoun's proposal (even though I do NOT want her to) because it's the best thing, blah-de-blah-de-blah... But I so want this to have a happy ending! But you're right, what you said in the auther's note in the beginning. It just doesn't seem possible for them to have a completely happy ending. Work is too important to them both, not to mention the danger of being connected to Heero... But that's why I'm hooked! Because I want to know whether or not they'll get a happy ending and if so, how?

As I said, one of my favorite things is how you write Heero and Relena. You truly seem to have grasped the core of their characters. I'm almost jealous of how well you write them! I absolutely love reading your fics!

I do, however, have one complaint... I know your chapters are long and it is inevitable that some typos will slip past, but I did notice quite a few mistakes. I attempted to read the entire thing in one night (though I failed as it would have kept me up till past four) and I did notice that it got better in the later chapters, but you still had several typos that drove me nuts! Mostly confused 'his' and 'her' stuff which I get all the time, but I just wanted to direct your attention to it.

Other than that, I loved it! Update soon! And don't leave us hanging on Final Mission Status too long either. I refuse to believe that the three of them were killed! Damn you Dorothy! That one WILL have a happy ending too! I demand it! ... Ok, I'm done. Much love! And updates, please?
Krissy Anne
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is an amazing story. I hope you keep writing. I crave more.
Jessica
2008-03-22
ch 9, anon.
abuseI love love love reading your stories. It is often difficult to find a balance between romantic and realistic situations and you draw the line very well. You pace your story well and the tension is well drawn. Please continue; you're doing a great job. I can't wait to read more! But it's fine with me if you update final mission status before this story. :)
islandgirlzee
2008-03-04
ch 9,
abusevery well written, love the fact that it keeps real to Heero's character and puts a different turn of events than things just coming together. Its more like what could have happened after the series ended
mc
2008-02-25
ch 9, anon.
abusei can't wait to read more, i love this story, thank you for writing it up, please keep up with the good works.
Rushi Star
2008-01-31
ch 9,
abuseI love this story but yeah she should marry this nice man that had support to offer her. In the other hand I think that Heero neds to show more emotions like jelousy. And now that the baby is in the picture to show that just how much the baby looks like his father makes this story more enjoyable to read. Anyways cook up something exciting!
flipped
2007-12-02
ch 9,
abusea dilemma of choosing between love and security.
love this chapter zapenstap do post an update soon!
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