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| Dreamer22 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuse::grins:: love it |
| Taylor Serenil 2005-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI want to know what happens next. And yes, I think Mac needs to be pulling his comforting instincts out of storage for Danny right now. As another reviewer pointed out, suicide attempts are *serious* bad news. Being the demanding reader that I am, I would also love to see you get to Mac/Danny/Flack. (Don't get me wrong--I want to read the Mac/Danny road too, but with those three, the journey could be *very* interesting). I tend to agree with Stella--Danny would have fewer problems (at least normally) with a menage a trois than Mac would. And I think Flack could live with a threesome more easily than with being a lonesome cupid. |
| Rini1031 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI definitly think that you shoud continue this story. You have an amazingly original, not to mention very good, idea going on here. It would be a shame if you stopped now. Very well done. I also like how Don and Stella are helping our couple(s) figure this out. Some more angst would help though. Keep up the good work. |
| Hannah Carrietta 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a sad but hopeful story! Please write more! |
| just a reader 2005-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, yeah. More is needed. If nothing else, Danny is going to have some serious trust issues with Mac - suicide attempts aren't just attention grabbers. And that letter ... and Flack. Yep. More needed. |
| Ashley 2005-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, poor Danny. Man, he's always the receiver of the angst isn't he. I'd love to see a threeway relationship with Mac, Danny and Flack, please, please write one. |
| XxBandGeekxX 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat story!! Sequel? Danny/Mac/Flack! Pretty please! :) |
| chaser1 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseLove it. Please update soon. |
| Cheryl 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved your CSI NY story 'Not The Answer'. Please continue on with this series. I think Mac needs to grovel a bit more, coddle Danny for a while. I loved the dynamics with all the guys. |
| pru 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseA great story. Is there going to be more because you left an idea with stella's last thought. |
| Laura-trekkie 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOh Danny! :(. Go Flack, though. He's got good insticts it seems and he's looking out for Danny when no one else is. I felt a little sorry for him at the end there as he seemed *very* protective of Danny and angry at Mac, especially when he threatened to take Danny away. I like Stella's idea and hope to see a sequel to this where Mac gets talked round. As for Mac, I'm glad he finally caught the clue bus, but I wish Danny hadn't had to go to such extreme measures to get him there! |
| white rose01 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseoh i like it! danny angst, mac angst and flack angst, what more could you ask for?! i really hope that you're going to continue this *crosses fingers* i wanna know what happens next! |
| Airmid 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseEnd… Hopefully, for now. 0 Maybe I should write about this… Right? Uh, yeah! Please do continue, the piece of paper has me intrigued. |
| Lexi Jones 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseYes you should write about Mac and Danny with Flack... Good story... really pulled in the emotions |