 Psycho Tangerine 2005-08-23 . chapter 1good one. |
 garnetred 2005-07-18 . chapter 1Excellent story. Please write soon. |
 TheSilentShogun 2005-07-01 . chapter 1Nice little thing you did here. I found myself chuckling at the end. Even though I don't really like one of the hook-up ideas but it's purely me. Keep it up. |
 Soldier's Pixie 2005-06-26 . chapter 1Loved it. :)
I really hope you'll write like a continuation or something and maybe explore the possible Syd/Sky and Z/Bridge things you alluded to in this. :-D |
 Anastasia Athene 2005-06-24 . chapter 1 Well, it seems that I didn't finish my review! I have no idea how that happened, but here is the rest of it...
I love it. LOL. Okay, anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I thought you got Z and Syd's characters right--I could definitely see this happening. I also loved the "girl talk" about their respective boys (Sky=cute. no question, by the way :) ) And Bridge/Z! They are my favorite pairing by far, though I can't write them worth crap...ah, well. Maybe you can give it a shot (hint, hint...just kidding). Anyway, great job. Funny, cute, what I said before.
This story totally is in my favorites. Hope to see more from you--maybe a Sky/Bridge take? LOL I need to stop now. Anyway, keep writing! |
 rembrandt 2005-06-24 . chapter 1Hah, cute! Late night conversations are the best and the worst. You want sleep, but you HAVE to talk.
ANyway, you should take the line about Gruumm hindering Sydney's relationship with Sky. That'd be hilarious if she went psycho ninja on them all, and really unleashed some determination and power just because she wanted to go out on a date.
But yeah. Thats what came to mind when I read that. :) |
 Anastasia Athene 2005-06-24 . chapter 1I. Love. It. Love it. This was great--funny, cute, etc. "You said no bull!" |
 BloomingViolets 2005-06-22 . chapter 1This is absolutely adorable!! LOL is this a one shot or are you going to continue? I love Sky and Syd!!I'd to see what Sky's reaction if Syd does pounce on him.. lol great job with this! |
 Sergeant Scarlett 2005-06-22 . chapter 1Cool! You gonna write anymore? Loved it, toodles! |
 Mandee1 2005-06-22 . chapter 1Aw, this was cute! Syd and Z were both in character and I could so see something like that happening between them. Good job, keep it up! |
 Funky In Fishnet 2005-06-22 . chapter 1nice little ficet, i love how the two girls talk to each other. It really made me smile, good job and keep it up :- ) |
 Jenluvskat 2005-06-21 . chapter 1That was funny. Syd would do that sort of thing in the middle of the night. I loved it when Z asked Syd what she wanted to do and she responded Sky! Hahaha! I really liked this. I hope to see more stories from you. It was good for your first fic. |