very nice job.

i can just say one word...
CUTE!

OOH! This is so so so sweet! U included the song very well here in this fic! I feel this is one of the best LacusKira fic I have ever read... bringing out the real personality of Lacus Clyne so fully well..

Fret not... they DON'T seem OOC - both of them depicted very well in fact! The song strikes a chord in my heart while reading the rest of the fic... HEHE ^.^

oh nice!!