Heartbeaking but very well-written.

Oh wow, that was great. I've always loved your writing. Being bored - as I am usually nowadays - I was looking for something different, and comeing from you that was excellent. Makes me want to consider the ship, though to be honest I've never really considered slash before XDD Great work. Please write more fictions. You are unbelievably brilliant at it.

ASQ

I'm really impressed with this story. An update would be really cool. I like how you did a really decent femmeslash with two of the lesser known characters.

Great stuff. I'm usually not a huge slash reader but I can't resist reading anything that has Alicia in it. To be honest I actually enjoyed the chemistry between the two. Nice work.

*Eruaphadriel*

I like the slash, it's something different from you. Though it made me wonder what kind of reaction Fred would of had if he had caught them.

And I was also wondering while I was reading this, that since you don't mind writting slash, do you take request?
Because I would love to see how you would protray Percy and Marcus.

Please and Thank you. =)

Although I'm not a huge fan of slash, I thought this was quite good. Very good, in fact. It was well written and I liked the character interaction. Well done!