Reviews for The Colour Black

Reviews For: The Colour Black

csismylover 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseAww That was very good. I really loved it. SO adorable.
kay 2005-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou've got talent but i think that Horatio and calliegh will never be together. If you knew more about CSI-i think you would write better... Enjoyed reading it though! Will look out for your other stuff in the futre too!
omearalee 2005-06-21 ch 1,	abuseI liked the concept here; it has potential. However much as I hate to be the killjoy at this party, I think that you seriously need to get a beta reader. No joke. While there were some grammatical errors, even for the cause of style, the most noticable error was the lack of 'I' capitalization. The first impression is everything. Kudos for formatting correctly! Keep writing; I hope to see growth in future endeavors.
Scarab Dynasty 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseHm... seems I'm the first reviewer... cool. :) An interesting pairing, not one I see a lot of, brief and to the point, which is good and in H's style. and only Horatio would notice something so simple. I like your take on the colour and the pairing. Nice job.
Scarab Dynasty 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseHm... seems I'm the first reviewer... cool. :) An interesting pairing, not one I see a lot of, brief and to the point, which is good and in H's style. and only Horatio would notice something so simple. I like your take on the colour and the pairing. Nice job.
Scarab Dynasty 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseHm... seems I'm the first reviewer... cool. :) An interesting pairing, not one I see a lot of, brief and to the point, which is good and in H's style. and only Horatio would notice something so simple. I like your take on the colour and the pairing. Nice job.

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