It is a really good set up to a story. It shows alot of promise and could be very entertaining. If you could only spell than it would be easier to read. cant wait to read more.

Nice. I'm surprised. Although. Prophet, Metatron, and Apostle are spelled this way. Not the way you had them. Update soon.

I liked it and I hope you write more. There was alot of spelling errors but it was alright.

Hugz

Lyndsay

I like it please write more and update soon:)

Sorry, but this was very hard to read. Try using a program with spell check or getting a beta reader, because there were so many errors in here I couldn't finish it. Don't think I'm trying to insult you, I just thought I'd say something before someone else came along and tore into you for it.