amusing

cool story, hope you update it.

I really hope you continue this, it's really funny and well written. My favorite part is when kimiko said "Let Kombat begin!", for some reason I keep picturing her in scorpion's outfit when she does that.

you should update this

Good overall. The key weakness of this story may be that this kind of thing seems very familiar from reading similar stories...

Ranma appears to be too angry. Oh I can perhaps see this attitude if it was a week after the incident, but not to this extent after about four years have elapsed. Also, Ranma seems to be mostly doing one sided blaming, when some of the problems were of his own making or at least prolonging due to his immaturity.

Basically good. The one point that seemed forced was the magic mushroom bit. It almost seems as if Nabiki should have said something like, "But you can't possibly be Ranma's mother, you look almost my age," or some such when they first met.

Of course, I just don't see Nabiki seriously letting Ranma have a mistress, or even joking about it like that...

Awesome. I hope that this story updates again soon.

Minor quibble: The sumo pig is Katsunishiki.

Katsuhito is Tenchi's grandfather.

Other than that, is an excellent fic, and one of my all-time favorites. :)

great story please update soon

great story with a great concept. The characters are a bit OOC, but they should be after the passage of time. You have some great possibilities here and I hope you continue this at some point.

Nice story so far, can't wait for the rest of the story though.

Small note: I was a little confused by your calling Konatsu a "kunochi." If you mean a female ninja (assuming you're also describing his mindset as him thinking himself a female still) then the correct word would be "kunoichi" which also means "Lady of the Dragon."

At any rate, keep up the good work can't wait for you to update.

Awesome plot! And the omake are priceless! Please update soon, if you can.

I was wondering it you have any plans on continues this fic. I really in enjoy it. I would like to see have how you have it pan out. Great Story.

WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!