  Katie
2008-04-29 . chapter 17 Hey, this story is really good. I know you said that you won't update until you get more reviews, but it's been over three years. You have to update sooner or later. You probably have the rest of the story all figured out and everything. But I have a small idea that might make it more interesting. You know how you had Yumi injured by that wolf by smashing her head into the wall. And that caused Yumi to fall unconcious. Well I think that it might be cool that because of that smash from the wall, caused brain damaged. I'm not saying that she goes mental or anything like that. But that she gets these dizzy spells often and she fall unconcious. Like she could be fine one minute but the next minute she's unconcious. It will make the story really exciting, and bring Ulrich and Yumi closer togeather. And just to make things even more dramatic, how about Yumi falls unconcious during a battle with the vampires and they kiddnap her. Once she is brought to Xana he has her locked up in a dungon until he decides how to kill her, but while deciding he has other vampires tourchering her, like rape or beatings. So the others set out to find her and eventually they do, and Ulrich finds her in the dungon, extremely weak pratcially dead and scared. Once Ulrich frees her from the chains Xana comes into the room, not at all supprised to see Ulrich.
I don't want to write the story for you, but when I have ideas for someone elses stories I need to tell them. I really like this story and I really want you to update soon, I don't care if you use my idea or not. You probably have the rest of this story already written. Just Please Update Soon. I really want to see what happens next. Please Update!
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