Awesome story i really liked it no wait i loved your story

Δ.Δ so amazingly fantasticly awesome i give this story 6/5 stars CB
and who ever things this story is disapointing or ungood is just jealous that ur story is so spectacular )

Great story! I love how Sesshomaru is in character, and yet he's so much more romantic too. You can really see his development throughout the story.

I love Charlotte! Her innuendos are seriously funny, and I can't stop laughing at her banters with Jaken.

And Charlie too! I positively tear-ed when I saw that they were separated. Having a brother myself, I can't even bear to think about being separated from him.

I like how Sesshomaru reconciled with Inuyasha. It wasn't mushy, it was super Sesshomaru, but yet it showed that their relationship will definitely become much better. And naming their daughter after Inuyasha's mother was really just the best he could do for the hanyou.

And Inuyasha's protectiveness over Charlotte was sweet as well! Not having a family for his whole life, it really is sweet that he would cherish and protect his new family even more so.

The only thing that was missing was Charlotte reading Charlie's letter, but I could save on the tears that would surely be spent if I ever had to read that.

I have one word to describe this...

FAN-FREAKIN-TASTIC!

Keep up the spectacular work!

this was pretty good :/

Loved the story, although the pacing of it could have been a little slower.

eeeeeeeeeeppppp! im such a fan of yew oh my this cant be the end! i read this in a day pls continue! ive grown attached to the story

You are a goddess of writing stories! Look what you've done to me! I'm meant to be studying for my English exam that's tomorrow! Jesus. That's how addicting it was; I decided to read your story rather than study!

I truly love and admire your story and cannot wait to read more of your stories. I love how Sesshomaru is not even slightly out of character but he is so loving and possessive (lovin' the possessiveness! ;) )

Goodluck for any future stories and you'll probably hear from me again! ;) Ta ta.

awwwwwwwww! how cute!.. i really hadn't expected three of them though it was still really ..just...adorable!

this isn't the end though is it? cuz i'd really like to see how this all goes now that they have the pups/cubs

plus naraku's still around sso they still have a villian they all hate

oh and also i just want to say that i really luvd ur story

it was written so well and everything was so origanal from how she traveled back in time to how her and sesshomaru actually fell in love

i really enjoyed reading this and i hope there will be more to read in the future

one last thing, this has to be one of the very best sesshomaruXoc stories i've ever read especially on FF cuz i cant seem to find good ones often!_!

lovely ending :)

love your story lol

but i cant understand one thing .

in this chapter you mention 'daughter' 's word . who do you referred at ?

T.T Oh my god, that was so freaking AWESOME! I'm sitting here in the dark crying my eyes out! I feel like such a flipping dork!

Well... that was probably the absolute best Sesshomaru fanfic that I have ever read! It was perfect in Sesshomarus character and the descriptions weren't over the top like most other fanfic's. I love Charlotte as a character. The perfect example of imperfect perfection. Very malleable and hilarious. It was an awesome story and I actually cried in the last chapter. The Izayoi part was beautiful and I definitely wasn't expecting it. I guess all I have left to say is thank you for writing such a wonderful story.

God I fell in love with this story of yours! :))

I know that this story has been finished for some time, but i most definitely do not remember wanting a fic to continue so badly! OC's that i have read previously were not handled well, but this story is going down as one of my favorites that i will come back to read over and over. Any chance at all that you would post that epilogue? or dare i think it, a continuation?

this was really good i liked it alot.

it would be awesome if you wrote a after story.