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Akia Starfrost
2008-06-29
ch 8,
abuseI know you haven't updated this story in quite some time, but come on! You can't leave me hanging there! That's just mean. This story has me totally hooked and I'd really love to see what happens! If you finish it I swear I'll give you a... *digs in pockets* ...uh...lint ball. Damn, I was sure I still had cookies somewhere...

But seriously, I love this story and I'd love to see more. ^^
Foxy McGee
2008-04-30
ch 8,
abusePlease update this! I'm dying from the wait.
Hayai Akurei
2008-03-24
ch 8,
abuseARRGGH!! How could you leave it there, hanging like that?! How could you, how could you, how could you?!?!?

The suspense is killing me! It's making me think of this one movie I saw involving a bank robbery except no one was really killed. It was all psychological stuff and whatnot. But this is still very exciting to read.

Your presentation of the characters is wonderful. And thanks for remembering to go back to the other Troopers and not just focus solely on Rowen and the messy predicament he's in. Sage will come up with something, won't he? I'd like to see him wiggle past the police and barge in there with Kento with him. Sage is scary when he's mad...

But I wonder what Ryo and Cye are up to.

I know you haven't updated in a long while, but readers like me are counting on you!! Do you know how few Ronin fanfics are out there that are really, truly good? I'd be willing to bounce ideas with you if it'll help get your writing mojo going.

Well, best of luck dear! I'll be keeping an eye on you!
Mischa Kitsune
2008-02-23
ch 8,
abuseGah. I finally get back into fanfiction reading and find a cliffhanger. ; ; So cruel, so cruel...Still pretty good though. Can't wait to see the end.
Whil-o-whisp
2007-12-31
ch 8,
abusePLEASE UPDATE! I hate cliffhangers TT_TT I wanna know whats gonna happen to Rowen? Is he gonna loose his arm? Is sage gonna save him? I WANNA KNOW! great story, i love it. oh another question. Cuffing the ear can make somebody deaf, will Rowen be deaf? arigato!
Starciya
2007-10-29
ch 8,
abuseGood story so far- please hurry up and don't leave us with a cliff hanger like that. Poor Rowen what will happen to our smart ronin??
High King Peter
2007-08-27
ch 8,
abuse*is about to pass out* ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD PLEASE!
narakunohime
2007-08-08
ch 8,
abuseI loved reading it. ^_^

Want to read more. ^^
Marie Kenobi
2007-07-30
ch 8,
abuseAn update! Yay!! But Rowen...eek! O.O Next chapter, please!
Drazzeltiger
2007-07-27
ch 8, anon.
abuseOh, man! Keep up the good work, I'm really interested now.
catgirl Serenity
2007-07-26
ch 8,
abuseAck! No! Don't stop it there! You have a horrible, HORRIBLE love for cliff hangers! Shame on you for leaving us hanging like that! At least Sage is on the way, hopefully he gets there in time.
Again great job with the emotions, I could see Rowan's fear filled face as Violence approached him with the saw. It was such a sudden change from his calm demeaner before and done so artfully! You are such a great writer! Please post soon and keep up the good work!
catgirl Serenity
2007-07-26
ch 5,
abuseThis chapter is probably your best so far. It definitely instilled the most emotion in me. My heart started racing with Rowan's when he heard the sirens, my body froze with fear of what would happen next, and I asked the same questions Rowan did. You are an amazing writer and you have a spectacular gift! Please keep up the wonderful work! This is such a creative and unique story and I hope you make more like it.
catgirl Serenity
2007-07-26
ch 1,
abusegood beginning, I like it. Not too much description but just enough to know what's happening. Also you do a wonderful job inducing emotions into your audience, I could feel the tense atmosphere and the fear almost as if I were there.
Great job!
WildfireDreams
2007-07-25
ch 8,
abuseROWEN!
vast-cerulean
2007-07-19
ch 8,
abuseAh ha! You didn't forget! Thank goodness...I was getting worried for a while there. :) Now this cliffhanger is worse than the last one. Please, please, please don't take too long putting up the next chapter! It might be too much to bear...*continues her melodramatic speech elsewhere*
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