I blame you for my lack of sleep last night. I could not stop reading you story. Very well done! ) I can't wait to read the squeal.

aww so kawaii

Ok first off I found the pic of Joanna and then found the pics you did for this story before i read it my first few thoughts were "EWW GROSS" "YUCK" and my favorite "NOW THATS JUST NASTY" But then i started reading it. At the end of chapter one i was like "Ok i'll read chapter two" so i did After that i really started to get into and i must addmit i really fell in love with Kantra and the rest of his family as well as Iliana Is that russian? well anyway thanks for writing a geart story. I'm going to read "This thing called parenting" right now.

Deep Blue Dragon

naw i didnt see that ep im just starting to catch up on te recent eps ...it seems i've missed out on soo much

I can't stop reading it I swear I fell asleep woke up an went right bacck to reading this damn I hate that I have to work today

Hn loving the start to this story

. . . wasn't he shot by her too?

and i want her to talk to these guys and drive them crazen.

awwwww . . .

she is totally going to be kidnapped

Cannnnn youuuuu feeeel theeeee Looooove Toooooniiiight!

No?

well you should, it tingles like when your leg falls asleep but not all crampy, but it will still cause you to walk funny.

they are fucked sideways!

ohhhhhh! he is screwed like blues clued

HE IS . . . well not pussywhipped . . . maybe shoe whipped?

yayyyyy!

and i must say, i love the backhanded flirting going on.

he's very sexist ain't he? I can't wait for him to be put in his place.

and i loved the punching bag comment.

Okay...where to start. first off i'll say i'm not a huge laien/predator fan, and have only recently ecome interested in the whole thing, reading fics ect. and yours was one of the first. at first i thought dragged on abit, and was getting bored, only kept interested by the humor. don't take is personally, i'm just lazy when it comes to so many chapters.

But here's the good part, after continuing to read i am so hooked into this story. now i see you weren't 'dragging out' the plot line, but doing a good solid pace. normally fics i read the plot goes so quickly you get used to this. but i think this is a good, solid well structured and thought out story with an original idea. i am not one to be so easily hooked, but on this, i am hooked, lined and sinkered ! Now i'm only half way through so far but just wanted to tell you how much this story rocks !

You got something. i don't know what that something, but it is something that is desperately lacking in some stories. Not being mean to other fan fic writers, but if you look and see what some people post on here, it's just horrible. and i mean people who have posted just rubbish to annoy others. like me. buy you, you are just typing a pure gold story, which i aim to follow. you don't disappoint ;-) and neither does your story and characters.

stay well and brillant, and cant wait to read more...and yay, i'm the 201st reviewer ! do i get a prize ? not likely :P sorry, so hyper from your story. take care. bye :)