A beautiful work of art.

o.o *melt* I know I'll sound corny saying this but the things you write are such poetry. For me, at least, the way you write the characters is so true to them! And I really look forward to reading all of your work _

Beautifull.

wow. That was really good. I'm speechless, for once

I LOVE IT! I'm a major AayaXTori fan and this is one of the best ones I've seen in a long time, R.C. McLachlan excluded (she's the best!). Also, I'm an angst fan...go figure. Your story had vivid imagery! I could almost SEE the snow flake memories whirling around Hatori! AND, what I'm most grateful for, you didn't make Aaya out to be a shallow airheaded moron with no depth. Thanks and update soon!

Wonderful, wonderful, and three times wonderful! I absolutely loved this, in case you couldn't tell. ((smirks)) Your writing style is amazing; it's very rich... refined, almost. The entire story flowed well and had a true enough concept to make it believable. But what truly stood out was your method of characterization. I'd never considered that Ayame was so lonely, but you brought that part of him to life expertly. Hatori was also done well. Despite the fact that I'm not a shounen-ai fan, the yaoi contained in this story was implicit enough to keep me from cringing. Very nice work.

My one criticism, however, would be clarification. I understood that this story was supposed to be rather vague, but clearing up who you're refering to if you say "he" or something of the like would make the fic more lucid. Other than that, I have no objections. This is going right on my favorites list.