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oh not fair not fair you have to continue. i mean it tha was a nice cliffy but you have to up date soon. please pretty please

Wow! That was exciting! I'm on the edge of my seat here! Who fired? Penelope or Peter? It has to be Penny... She's a determined lady, always ready for a fight. I really hope it was her... They have to stop Peter and get Alan some help...

And then they'll have to work on helping themselves to deal with everything, cause it's bound to leave some marks, right?

Now, since you left us with a cliffie, you'd better hurry up with the next chapter!

well she knew peter had a gun so i hope the gun shot was from her before he shot her but i guess we'll just have to see, won't we? so all in all what i'm trying to say is UPDATE SOON!

Oh crap! This is not good. I can only hope that Lady P got the drop on that insane SOB. Great work on both this chapter and your other story.

OK, that's just mean, ending on a cliffhanger like that!

Great chapter. Your POV was fine, very believable. Jeff beleiving that he was the cause of Alan's kidnapping, Scott's anger at his helplessness. Again, great chapter. Can't wait for more!

Dude, waiting - impatiently - for another update! C'mon gal! Write faster! Getting bored of reading the same old first 17 chapters of this story over n over. Z z z...z z z...z z z...

Love Fried Eeyore x

Rock n peace *holes up the peace and rock signs*

OH NO...so close, and yet soo far...plz update ASAP, or else i might go INSANE with worry for them!

OMG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

Oh a cliffy! Can't wait for more!

Lauren

YEA! YOU UPDATED... OK now up date again! lol! oh poor alan he's so very sick and weak in both mind and body so... boys get him to the ambulnce! so he can get well again! and as i said before update soon!

Oh my, they're gonna be in real trouble now, right? Peter's already all worked up because of what Jack said. He's NOT gonna like the fact that they're trying to get Alan out of there... Getting closer to the bad-guy-butt-kicking part? ;-)

I hope Jeff's gonna show himself soon. I really wanna see him face Peter. See what he's gonna do. Can't be anything good. You just don't mess with the Tracys.

So, good chapter, as always :-). Alan fighting against his brothers really shows just how sick he is. But he will get better, right? Oh, and I'd love to read something like an aftermath after they get Alan home. Well, actually I'd like to read just about anything right now. Just as long as there are more chapters. :-D.

Oh, and love the fast updating too! Hint, hint, hint ;-)Next chapter please! Bring it on!

wo ho! update! wonderful thing to see after a hard and final day of exams. really brightened me up. now, if u could just brighten up tomorrow...

OMG! You have to update immediately. I want to know that they got away! You are doing wonderful work with the exception of leaving hanging like this. Update, update, update.

Oh shit! That's not a good sign. Will they make it out in time?