Reviews for No Regrets, No Looking Back, No WhatIfs

Reviews For: No Regrets, No Looking Back, No WhatIfs - Reviews: Page 1 of 10

Elliesmeow 2008-02-19 ch 11,	abuseLoved this. And as much as I loved Ozzie too I'm glad it was Nick that Sara ended up with. -Ellie
Future Miss CSI60 2006-07-13 ch 11,	abuseOKay, I have a few thigns to adress... 1. yes, I remember the old tv show with Cisco and Pancho. I know! I totally agree that nick and his dad would have a close relationship with nick always seeking validation, thats why when he moved away and found Grissom as a 'father' he sought validation from him. 2. the beginning 'dream'...not nice!:) I was so ** when you ended it at the eye color! lol. but...you made up for it at the end. 3. this could SO become a movie! in the third to last scene between Warrick and Sara (B4 her and Nick's date) i could practically here the music playing, (fun upbeat music like at the end of every good movie...how sad do I sound?) and the very last scene...I could hear Wild CHerry's 'play that funky music' in the background as the story faded and you could hear Brass and Rick banter! (seriously...i sound so pathetic) 4. are you going to make a sequal for Rick and Cat? Im sorry but that regrett in his voice when Brass mentioned Cat and Ozzie getting together DESERVES to be adressed...you must make a sequal! 5. I love it! I'm normally VERY GSR, but I REALLY enjoyed this book...the ironic thing is...I was planning a semi-similar relationship between two other characters in a book of mine...I won't say who or what book though. LOVE THE BOOK! ADDING TO MY FAVS.
Future Miss CSI60 2006-07-12 ch 5,	abuseugh...ozzie makes me mad...he's ruining their fun...nicky's being a prick, while that's (secretly)hot, its making me upset...poor nicky.
Anwa 2006-06-24 ch 11,	abuseM2S All right, while I will admit to loving a piece of fluff every now and again, this probably drabbled on longer then it should have. Please don't take that the wrong way, it was not meant to be taken as anything other then constructive critism. After awhile I found myself skimming sections because you just kept repeating and summarizing everything. I liked that you had the characters dilberate, but at the same time, enough is enough. Move on with the story. Also the conversation between Nick and his dad was extremely awkward and uncomfortable even to read. No son would be that open with his father and visa versa, no matter how close they are. And both Sara and Nick seemed a bit whiny the entire time. Towards the end it just seemed like they were either crying or yelling, which would make sense had they been two teenagers, but they are adults. And I don't see Sara being quite so frank with her emotions (character-wise). This might have been a good three, four chapter fic. I liked the idea of the camping trip and Nick having qualms about asking Sara and/or crossing a line with her as a sort of background story. And I liked how you introduced a third character to complicate things, but you made him so similar to Nick that it almost seemed pointless character-wise. I would have perfered to see you bring in someone that would match Sara's character instead of Nick's. Nick should be more her foil on the surface, making Sara question. Instead you created the same character for Sara to pick between, making the big to-do thoughout the fic seem pointless. You also need to learn to proof-read! Words should have spaces in between them. (Ex. "I broke them allthe time" should have been "I broken them all the time"). This isn't a terrible mistake, and is usually forgiven, but you managed to collect such a large mass of them that it became annoying and otherwise unforgivable (without sounding quite so harsh). Besides that, you're grammer was pretty-well handled. You also need to add spaces or dividers in between your sections. You sometimes swtiched mid-chapter from Nick to Sara, and using the divider in the editing section on would be very benifical in those cases for clarity reasons. I know I attacked your characterization a lot, but I'm just being nitpicky. Unlike a lot of authors on this site, you do show potential for being a good writer. You understood that your fluff piece needed a plot (something that is generally lost on most fluff-writers), and in order to have a plot you must have a conflict (a concept many authors on this site have yet to grasp), and the art of description. Amazingly enough, you had the idea to actually tell me what was going on in the scene, where the scene was taking place, and, gasp,what was happening in the scene (save dialouge)! You just have to keep working on perfecting those characters, and learning when to properly end a fluff piece before it changes from something similar to a cute little bunny into a rabid gozilla-like energizer bunny on the loose. And Ozzie? Seriously? (Sorry, had to throw that in there. I know you may have been going for a joke, but Ozzie is a pretty bad name, you have to admit). All right, really finished now. Hugs and kisses. Anwa.
stingzgolf04 2005-10-12 ch 11, anon.	abuseI really like your story, especially the last chapter when it came full circle. Good job.
RachiU 2005-08-03 ch 11,	abuseWonderful! I liked how you brought a third party to the whole N/S dynamic in the story and didn't make him a jackass...quite refreshing!
Mma63 2005-07-20 ch 1,	abuseI'm waiting for your update. Please continue.
CSI3Snickers 2005-07-18 ch 11,	abuseSequel!Sequel!Sequel! You made me cry when throughout ch.9 to 11. I LOVED the Nick-in-a-shooting-range visual. That's what Nick would really do. Plus the visual image was hot (on a shallow note...) -Leann
Vengeful 2005-07-17 ch 11,	abuseA wonderful ending. I was very happy to see it end NS. Well done!
FoxRox1 2005-07-15 ch 11,	abuseThe End! cries Now what will I do? M2S if I promise to review, will you write a new NS story as soon as possible?? Re: me being ** Nick...well I see your point. You do tend to take more things in consideration with age. But then you also learn, like Ozzie, to grab a chance while you see it. - Will check out your other stories but Snickers are my preference. Or Sandle. - I think this chapter was good. I liked the twist with Ozzie at Sara apt when Nick came by. (Part of me now wants to mutter "serves Nick right" but I will hold my tongue. Oh, I said that out loud?) I liked Brass´ hopeless romantic line. It cracked me up. And the betting was cool. Didn´t really like the dancing. I have no idea why though. Maybe it was too sweet for me. All in all a wonderful story! I really like the "friends with benefits arrangement that backfires" idea. Chapter 8 was my favorite part. :-) sits back with a drink waiting for M2S next fic to pop up
red blood 2005-07-14 ch 11, anon.	abusewhew!i'm so relieved.. thank you so much for that wonderful ending!
Clazziquai 2005-07-13 ch 11,	abuseGreat ending. I'm glad Nick and Sara got together in the end, finally! Hope you wrote more NS stuff in the future.
bomber6 2005-07-13 ch 11,	abusePerfect ending to a perfect story! Thankyou
Jacinda 2005-07-13 ch 11,	abuseI do love the ending, but I found Ozzie really endearing. Excellent work :)
A Christy 2005-07-13 ch 11,	abuseSigh... I'm almost sad it's over, especially since I had only really just found it a short time ago! Oh well. Wonderfully done, I must say, and I was extremely happy to see this chapter up; I'm so bored at work I think I might lose my mind! This was an extremely rewarding diversion. :D I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve next time. So, please hurry!

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