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sregner 2007-08-22 ch 1,	abuseI generally do not like Slash/ but that was lovely. Thanks
apythia 2007-06-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseMaybe it's because I am getting tired, but this one made me a little teary; it was poignent and beautiful and utterly perfect.
brenda79 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseLoved this. Definitely got me thing about hope and about the future and what you can make it.
shadowycat 2006-11-04 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful.
Stronghammer 2006-08-23 ch 1,	abuseYou write such awesome SS/RL stories.
fahzzyquill 2006-08-17 ch 1,	abusethis was so good. a really good story about the direct aftermath of the final battle. you're such a good writer. i can't wait to read more.
Luny Lady 2006-04-26 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely adorable. I love who you portray seemingly accurately how dearest Sevvie would act in different situations. I just read your SSLL fic, and the way he interacted with her seemed right for him, just as the way he interacts in this one with Lupin seems right. Bravo.
TheDeathChamber 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abuseNice piece.
Nuppu 2005-07-06 ch 1,	abuseI bet this has already been said, but this text was just very, VERY beautiful and, well, just so good... I almost cried. Happy endings are too much for me! sob Great, beautiful and wonderfull... I don't have enough words...
I Write Tragedies 2005-07-02 ch 1,	abuse-on the Severus’s lap,- The word "the" needs to be omitted. -but not to face of the man to whom it belonged.- The word "of" needs to be omitted. -Their kisses were and timid and sweet and thirty years in the making.- I'm not sure if you meant for there to be a word in between the words "were" and "and" or not. - Very well written and perhaps one of the best well written Severus/Remus fics I've ever read. I don't usually read fics that take place after the war on the battlegrounds because, personally, I don't believe there will be an actual war, but this was written too well for me to look over. I loved the end because of its beauty and finality and the word usage made me happy because it's so rare to find decent word usage in HP fan fiction. Good job. I will definitely be adding this to my favourite story list.
fluff206 2005-06-27 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful.
May 2005-06-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery lovely. You writing is the best.
Freckled Glasses 2005-06-25 ch 1,	abuseif i can use only one word to describe this story it'll be magical.^ not that the plot has never been written, but i don't think i've ever seen it written this well before. it's... real. i can hear the silence of the crowd. i feel the wearines, the silent confusion and the timid hope. i feel like i've gone through the final battle, and that part wasn't even in the fic. i can smell the air. i feel like lifting my hand to shade my eyes against the light as they stare at the sunrise and i can feel the damn grass they're sitting on prickling my palm. of all your fics i've read, i think this is the best yet. takes hat off
Meta Capricorn 2005-06-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful, beautiful like the morning they are watching, beautiful like the songs of the bird they see flying and beautiful like the peace and calmness that is around them. I could really imagine to sit on the hill as well and watch them and the sunrise, it was like sitting on the edge of the world and simply watch. I loved that, and I loved the 'I wonder if...' the new possibilities. Simply great! Yours, Meta
Snape's Nightie 2005-06-23 ch 1,	abuseweeps oh that was gorgeous!

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