 Annabelle 2006-04-11 . chapter 4 Keep writing! It would be unwise to rouse the temper of a HUGE! J/E fan like your's truly. lolol jk but keep writing pweeze |
 rochelle 2006-02-15 . chapter 4 I've been waiting forever for this story to continue, pweeze pweeze pweeze! finish. I just adore Jack, and Elizabeth, they be the handsomest couple ever to sail the seven seas! lolol |
 mrs. skywalker 2005-08-17 . chapter 4 like u said ur self. i also would not like to reread the entire movie, if nothing is going to be different. |
 Too lazy 2005-08-17 . chapter 4 You Slimy, mangy cad you! Not telling me you updated..^.^ kidding great but make the next chapter longer ! |
 Tiffany Sparrow 2005-08-02 . chapter 3 Good chapter, good chapter. I love Jack Sparrow! He's so funny! Anyways, again, good job. Please keep up the good work! I'll be awaiting the next chapter! |
 Too Lazy 2005-08-01 . chapter 3oh so good more now please! don't make me hurt you...or worst yep i'll hurt Jack!! (Jack hits My head.)
Ouch! |
 yhanks 2005-08-01 . chapter 3 Dear Yatzee,
My favorite color is green and this fic rocks my face off :) As do you, update soon homefry! :) --Yhanks |
 Tiffany Sparrow 2005-07-18 . chapter 2 Uh oh. That's not a good thing. Poor Jack! Now he's going to be put in jail for sure! No no no no! Darn that Estrella and her unannounced entrance! How dare she?! Anyways, good work on this chapter. Please hurry up and update! |
 too lazy 2005-07-18 . chapter 2 more please. This is getting good! |
 Stephanie 2005-07-17 . chapter 2 YES MORE J/E STOIRES CONTINUE! |
 mrs. skywalker 2005-07-17 . chapter 2 STUPID MAID! why knock a perfectly handsome and charming pirate unconsious. what is in her head, really. other than that absurd maid (hehe), i loved it! till next time, toodles! |
 penny 2005-07-17 . chapter 2 don't worry if you don't "match" the script word for word or scene for scene. that can be tiresome, as we all know it by heart! continue being original as that is more refreshing. re: your reply as to feeling "dirty" when writing love/sex scenes, never feel that way, as that is the natural progression between a man and a woman that love (or lust) for each other! keep going, this is very good! |
 Savannah 2005-06-24 . chapter 2*looks down* *blinks* *grumbles a bit* Hmph, well, you did an awesome job homie. This story is, as all of yours are, completely fantastic :) Hope you update soon...KILL ALL WHO ARE MORONIC! *coughs* sorry, outburst, check ya later ;) |
 Tiffany Sparrow 2005-06-23 . chapter 2 Hmm, okay. That was interesting. But, if I may, when I did my story "Like Father Like Daughter", I watched the scenes from the movie that I needed and even had an online script I went by. If you'd like the link to the script I'd be very much obliged to give it to you. Other than that, good job! It was very well written and I can't wait for the next chapter! *smiles* Well, 'til next time! Ta! |
 SimplyNorma 2005-06-23 . chapter 2Woo-hoo! I love JE fics! They rock. They make a good couple and JD is WAY hotter than that stinky-pooie Will Turner. I'm glad you wrote a JE fic cuz they are rarely any on the site. Please update soon, cant wait to see what happens next, savvy? ~ Renata |